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Comment by jvs posted on A walk around Malham in the Yorkshire Dales at 31/01/2022 - 20:37
Comment by jvs posted on Around Castle Hill at 31/01/2022 - 20:11
Comment by jvs posted on Ribblesdale and Whernside at 31/01/2022 - 20:06
Comment by jvs posted on Ribblesdale and Whernside at 29/01/2022 - 15:34
And yes - the 28-105 is a real “do anything” lens. Tailor made for a day’s walkabout.
Comment by jvs posted on Around Castle Hill at 29/01/2022 - 15:27
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Comment by jvs posted on Ribblesdale and Whernside at 29/01/2022 - 14:57
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Comment by jvs posted on Around Castle Hill at 29/01/2022 - 14:30
Comment by jvs posted on For sale: Pentax DA 12-24mm f4 ED AL (IF) lens at 31/12/2021 - 07:53
Food for thought in your comments, which is no bad thing, so here’s my response.
Not painting or cropping out the fence/wires in 1 and 3 is easily solved. The distraction is more obvious to me in 3, less so in 1. A slight crop of 1 also brings the rule of thirds bang into play and losing some grass at the bottom makes little difference. I did actually experiment with using the power lines as lead-in lines, below, but decided they were too intrusive.

In my head at the time, the principal aim in all of the photos was to try and capture the lovely soft light. The composition/content of the image was, I think, second to that aim, but if it didn’t work (and my wife would agree with you, not me, here, David!), I obviously didn’t achieve my aim! So in no.4, I saw the contrast between the bright light of the foreground fields and the light/shadows across the valley as points of contrast, complementing each other. Perhaps the far side of the valley needed more brightness and contrast (as in no.7) to take the eye across.
I take your point completely that no.8 is lacking a real point of focus, no.9 is possibly all leading line and not much else, cropping out the wall in no.10 takes nothing away except a potential distraction; and I let the house in the woods in no.12 fool me into thinking there was something sufficiently interesting in the middle ground, but that’s not really the case, so I should have binned that one!
I like no.11, but then I know what I’m looking at there!
Finally, for no.13, I think I got carried away by the lovely light/colour in the two bushes on either side. I did take another which I didn’t post, but which may well be the one I should have posted as it was taken from a slightly higher vantage point. Here it is:

Anyway, thanks for taking the time for such a comprehensive comment - it's really appreciated. And I must find time to explore Padley Gorge - I tend to end up in the Dale area when I go walking with a pal down there.
Best wishes,
Comment by jvs posted on Mist, sunlight and shadows in the Colne Valley at 23/12/2021 - 18:17


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7 The approach to Malham Cove ... lighting difficulties solved (I hope) by B&W conversion ...
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9 A slightly different angle and smaller aperture help too...
10 -- and Malham Cove.