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Comment by Lilly posted on ...and another reason why not to buy CANNON..... at 10/10/2007 - 16:11
Comment by Lilly posted on ...and another reason why not to buy CANNON..... at 10/10/2007 - 15:13
I really think there are a lot to show this week - some really good pictures!
Comment by Lilly posted on Discussion: Weekly Competition 14 "Motion" at 12/10/2007 - 17:09
Comment by Lilly posted on how to make a STICKY at 08/10/2007 - 14:46
Hi
I agree, an amazing job well done, hats off to Lilly.
Thanks for the kind remarks and the commendation.
We are all winners when we get the sort of critique that we can learn from.
My wife and I had great fun using your comments and judgment as a guide to our own judging of the competition. My wife has a far better eye than myself. I now realise I am on a big learning curve on the way I view the images.
Many Thanks
P.s. If anybody has any ideas about how to reduce the annoying background without affecting the motion, I would love to hear. I only have elements 5 at the moment.
Lilly

Comment by Lilly posted on Weekly Competition No. 14 "MOTION" at 15/10/2007 - 15:57
Comment by Lilly posted on Weekly Competition No. 14 "MOTION" at 15/10/2007 - 13:07
After putting the rest of my life on hold I have managed to consider and analyse each entry, forgive me if I repeat myself a bit!
I did give you a clue in ‘sock it to me’ by which I meant lots of motion, the results are influenced by this, WELL DONE to ONE AND ALL…
worn out Lilly!
StrawberryBeret: Potentially a good subject, lots of motion in bumper cars but is diluted by fact that both cars and background are OOF. Panning with subject or focusing on background would have been more effective.
John Riley: Immediately I saw this I loved it, it is very painterly and is so very different, however, if there had been some area of focus on the great tit, it would have been a strong contender. I would still like it on my wall though as a melange of colour and movement.
McBrian: Very well executed shot, purposeful lighting, dancer seems frozen in motion just too much, would love to have seen more movement in her skirt at least.
Nimitz: Similar idea to John’s, but has the areas of pin sharp focus that accentuates ‘motion’ for me, the bokeh suits it well and it is a delight to look at, well done. SECOND PLACE
Jusygetoutandride: Plenty of motion here but I just feel it lacked some interest; I wanted something more in the image to hold my attention.
Clarky: Very cute and well-caught unusual shot, I wish you had cropped it though to get rid of distracting white blob bottom left.
Drerka: What a joyful shot, full of fun and happiness, a deeper DOF maybe would have brought the riders into better focus, but perfect for mono, tonal range could be a bit more punchy.
Prieni: That kid is certainly moving, I think it would have had more impact if you had had a wider angle; the surf on the left seems to overpower and unbalance the image.
Kim C: It may be faster than a bullet, but there is nothing else in the image to relate the speed of the aircraft to and it has too many magenta overtones to me. What is he dropping – bombs? What is going on in bottom right, too distracting.
Chirpy: This is a great first entry, captured extremely well and I love the letterbox format, suits it well, plenty of movement in water and birds and technically fine.
Dirk1000: A most unusual entry Dirk! I am really not sure what to say, other than to me it says I am an aircraft painting and my motion is perhaps I am vibrating and revving up and about to take off, a PP effect that does not really work for me I am afraid.
Peter Elgar: great reportage shot, love the angle which increases the motion aspect, and eye contact makes it, isn’t it great when these grab shots come out so well, but lots of white specs from scanned neg that need cloning out.
Niblue: Wow! When I see this I am the passenger and motion hits full on, fast and gritty, tells a story, that’s what we all try to do and this image scores on that plus more. The out of focus dash and one hand on the wheel only adds to the drama of the image, it’s like being in a tunnel of motion, what speed were you doing with one hand? FIRST PLACE
Daniel Bridge: Beautiful colours and a well executed shot, but the motion is not dramatic enough for me.
Amoringello: nice crop but I am not really sure what has happened or is going to happen here? I presume the three little girls may be airlifted, but feel they are heavily weighting the centre of the image down and not much motion is happening.
Lenscape: Fast moving subject well caught, a lot of action, I like the way the droplets of water sparkle and energise this moment, but the colours of rider and scooter lack impact and contrast.
Adam P: This little drooling guy is on a mission, very effective use of slow shutter speed, I love the way just part of his face is in focus.
Summers: good potential was there, but is spoilt by a wonky horizon and underexposed.
RWG: frozen in motion, some more blur in wing action would bring more motion and it would have been nice to see a little more of birds head and eye.
Ammonyte: Very very nice shot, almost perfectly executed, I spy a bit of cloning top left? – and the portrait format suits this so well. I do envy those that can achieve such sharpness in a fast moving subject.
Deecy: This is so sweet, slow motion - I do love the use of mono in this timeless type of image, however, I find the burnt out background which spills into her face detracts from it, a little soft overall and I would crop a bit of the bottom.
JB: just makes you want to get out there and ride! The effects of motion are demonstrated with the out of focus background, spraying water, tightly cropped for impact and nice and sharp main subject, I found the rocks bottom right distracting, would have cropped right hand side.
jps: very imaginative and painterly this one, it reminds me of one of the French impressionists paintings. Off the wall and a hard one to judge, not a great scan as it lacks resolution and depth, unusual.
Galoot: I like the contrast in subject & background and colours here, rich autumn harvest hues contrasting with very mechanical motorcycle colours, no mistaking the motion of the rider, full on, those roadside grasses on right anchor the shot, does the job for me. THIRD PLACE
Karma Mechanic: We have mega motion, glossy car ads here, how did you do this yourself? Being picky, the white scratch at top is annoying would have cloned it out, but clever & imaginative. Highly Commended
ChrisA: we are up up and away, motion yes, another well executed shot with nothing to fault apart from I find the horizon confusing close to undercarriage, on land or not, I know it isn’t, but visually a puzzle.
malo1961: this would have been perfect for FLIGHT comp. well caught image but too static to really demonstrate motion this time.
Gashley: One of the few panned shots here which are not easy, I know, but sharky doesn’t scream motion to me and I feel the colour is dull & lifeless.
Ronniechristian: for a first entry Ronnie this is very good, pin sharp where it counts and great demonstration of motion in the wings where it counts, such a shame the sickly green colour backcloth clashes and competes with such a beautiful subject. Highly Commended
Pschlute: how do you manage to get such pin sharp shots all the time Peter, what PP tool do you use, please share? Perfect exposure, composition, etc etc.. love the hand caressing the bonnet, but too static at the starting blocks.
Phew...........Zzzzzzzzzzzz
Comment by Lilly posted on Weekly Competition No. 14 "MOTION" at 15/10/2007 - 00:14
thank you....Lilly
Comment by Lilly posted on Weekly Competition No. 14 "MOTION" at 14/10/2007 - 23:57
Lilly
Comment by Lilly posted on Weekly Competition No. 14 "MOTION" at 08/10/2007 - 14:44
Lilly,
Although in a competition I think is not ethic to comment about a rival image before the judging, I feel necessary to express my deep and preoccupant impression your image shook my soul.
It makes me remember this dismal image where a soldier was shooting directly the head of his victim, that all the world showed some years ago; to this popular “Russian Roulette”, where for money (in these communities) people die. The childhood prostitution and so on…
Very impressive shot Lilly. I think this kind of images is one of the roles our contemporary photography is compromised with.
For the enormous dramatic content of the image, I think, furthermore than winning the Pentaxusers competition, is meritorious for The Pulitzer Prize (Breaking News Photography).
Well done Lilly. And make the world know your image.-
Best regards.
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Dirk TROTTEYN.
K10D+ Sigma 18-50 1:2.8 DC Lens.
thank you for your thoughts, they are very much appreciated, when I saw this before my eyes I could not believe them, Sebastião Salgado has been a inspiration of mine for years and I hope and imagined he would have released the shutter also.
Comment by Lilly posted on Discussion: Weekly Competition 13 "The Industrial Landscape" at 06/10/2007 - 17:54




they are sexist too