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Comment by johnriley posted on Critique Please (3) at 04/10/2013 - 08:36
Comment by johnriley posted on Green Doors at 04/10/2013 - 08:29
Comment by johnriley posted on Green Doors at 03/10/2013 - 22:26
OK, the right of the image is empty, so I'd be inclined to crop it and make a square composition.
Not sure I want to vote on anything but the best image though, so I'll have a look and see what the competition is like!
Comment by johnriley posted on Come guys, please support pentax and vote for my picture on national geographic website at 03/10/2013 - 16:23
Now the short list is k-30 or k-50 - with either twin WR kits lenses 18-55 & 50-200 or WR 18-135. With that would be a 50mm prime - unsure on the manual or auto at this stage (depends on funds).
Your options are all very sensible and I'd say go for it!
Comment by johnriley posted on Hello - about to be a Pentax user... at 03/10/2013 - 15:54
Comment by johnriley posted on RICOH GR & 21mm Wide Converter Lens...British Museum Photographs at 03/10/2013 - 15:21
Comment by johnriley posted on Gold Spotmatic at 03/10/2013 - 11:32
Comment by johnriley posted on Critique Please (1) at 03/10/2013 - 11:30
The SMC Pentax-DA 40mm f/2.8 Limited is blisteringly fast for example, presumably because the focusing has such a short throw. The 55-300mm has a lot more work to do.
Comment by johnriley posted on F & FA lens focus speeds at 03/10/2013 - 08:46
Comment by johnriley posted on New K3 image - interesting! at 03/10/2013 - 08:03


The first thing that strikes me is that there's too much foreground. You need enough to show the effect you are trying to achieve, but no more. Anything not needed, cut out. So that would tighten it up a bit.
The pillars are the interesting part, along with the under-arch area, and yet the brightest part of the picture is the top, causing our eyes to wander upwards and away from the subject. So I'd burn in that top area so we concentrate on the main subject.
Finally, the image looks tilted to the left, so I'd do a small clockwise rotation.
Hope that helps. You've seen a good subject and approached it well technically, leaving just the fine points to iron out.