Well I considered your questions, Mike, and played around with some alternative cropping to see what I like best. Think I still like the second window in there, b/c I like the repeat of the seat/handle. I cropped the line beneath the studs and some off the top and left, but the girls are still central. Improvement?




Without the second window (I think here it's more about the girls than the car):

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f5.6, 260mm, 1/60sec, iso800(because I forgot to change it)
film grain applied

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