girls in a trolley car
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Posted 30/06/2009 - 19:39
Do you need the second window? If you feel you do then do you need to include the line of the panel beneath the studs?
For me the girls are too central and I wouldn't have chosen that title as again for me the girls aren't the real subject. Very nice colours and keeping the focus on the frame rather than the girls was a clever choice.
Mike
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For me the girls are too central and I wouldn't have chosen that title as again for me the girls aren't the real subject. Very nice colours and keeping the focus on the frame rather than the girls was a clever choice.
Mike
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Posted 01/07/2009 - 05:44
Well I considered your questions, Mike, and played around with some alternative cropping to see what I like best. Think I still like the second window in there, b/c I like the repeat of the seat/handle. I cropped the line beneath the studs and some off the top and left, but the girls are still central. Improvement?
Without the second window (I think here it's more about the girls than the car):
"Just put your eye to the camera and push the button-thingy."
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Without the second window (I think here it's more about the girls than the car):
"Just put your eye to the camera and push the button-thingy."
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Posted 01/07/2009 - 07:09
I think that both are an improvement and I can see your point about the repeated seat. So I think I'll take up residence on the fence on these two! Pity about the high ISO but still nice colours!
Mike
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You can see some of my shots at my Flickr account.
Mike
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Posted 01/07/2009 - 18:45
oops.
Looked previously the pics on my working place computer. Didnt notice that part of the pics were hidden.
I have to correct my last post.
Dont like the crop of nr 3. Too much like the window itself.
Aiki
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Looked previously the pics on my working place computer. Didnt notice that part of the pics were hidden.
I have to correct my last post.
Dont like the crop of nr 3. Too much like the window itself.
Aiki
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Pentax K20D; SMC DA 18-55mm II kit; Sigma AF 70-300/4-5.6 APO DG MACRO
GIMP Flickr
PPG
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f5.6, 260mm, 1/60sec, iso800(because I forgot to change it)
film grain applied
"Just put your eye to the camera and push the button-thingy."
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