An Industrial Scene

paulyrichard
Posted 26/06/2009 - 14:21 Link
One of my greatest influences in photography is the work of Lee Friedlander. I wonder what he would've made of this scene?

Turbine

[IMG]http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j159/paulyrichard/turbine71of1bordered.jpg[/IMG]

Here is the original, unedited colour shot. Blue really was the colour on that day.

[IMG]http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j159/paulyrichard/Picture405.jpg[/IMG]
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Father Ted
Posted 26/06/2009 - 14:51 Link
I think you did right by converting it to mono.
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pschlute
Posted 26/06/2009 - 15:15 Link
Nice shot, I love the clean lines. I am wondering if it would be better without the foreground fence...I am not sure.
GivingTree
Posted 26/06/2009 - 15:31 Link
Good one. I like the fence.
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Malo1961
Posted 26/06/2009 - 18:08 Link
Ideally , the wind turbine should be a bit higher. Showing all the blades.
Other than that, a great shot and a great mono treatment.(as usual)

Martin.
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davidtrout
Posted 26/06/2009 - 18:57 Link
I like the black and white treatment although I think the pic looked pretty good in colour too. Yes, leave the fence in, it's part of the industrial scene.
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Thordell
Posted 26/06/2009 - 20:14 Link
Interesting that the original was in mono but Paul chose to go from blue mono to grey mono. Would like to see a larger version of the original to see which worked best.

And yes, I am for the fence left in as well.
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paulyrichard
Posted 26/06/2009 - 21:31 Link
Thanks guys, I appreciate you lookin' and commentin'.

Jackie, here is a larger colour image.

[IMG]http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j159/paulyrichard/Picture405-2.jpg[/IMG]
"All the technique in the world doesn’t compensate for the inability to notice." - Elliott Erwitt

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Thordell
Posted 27/06/2009 - 07:59 Link
Thank you Paul, you know what I am going to say, I like it in blue but guess you had a good reason to make it grey.
Jackie H
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Most used glass
50mm f1.4, 60-250mm, 28-80mm,
Sigma 105mm 2.8 Macro & Bertha 50-500

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