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swarf
Really nice, evocative presentation. Did you use a blur vignette on this?

Re the 'alternative #1' - I prefer your first one, it has a greater sense of mystery to me, which add to the overall interest.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on Five in a Row - Bwlchmawr at 28/10/2014 - 18:02

swarf
percy wrote:
I agree that SRS have always been very good. I've never had anything other than first class service from them, and wouldn't hesitate to recommend them.
+ 1

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on srs at 27/10/2014 - 22:13

swarf
Very nice and well exposed. It would have been really easy to allow the highlights in the waves to blow.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on Five in a Row - Bwlchmawr at 27/10/2014 - 14:06

swarf
Alan

That's a cracker (but just to be super critical - couldn't you have got the falling water droplets a little sharper! :lol

This has been a really interesting, and excellent set. It's very hard for me to pick a personal favourite, not least because of the different styles you've given us, but probably nos. 1 & 4 just about shade it for me.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on 5 in a row - Blythman at 24/10/2014 - 17:14

swarf
Pentaxophile wrote:
Storm in a teacup as far as I'm concerned!
Ditto

Comment by swarf posted on K-S1: Oh dear! They might of tried! at 24/10/2014 - 12:11

swarf
Alan

Lovely - nice composition, light and colour. The exposure time you've chosen works well for me also. It would have been easy to have a long exposure to 'smooth out' the sea and create one of those 'milky sea' shots, but by choosing a shorter exposure you've captured the details in the waves and the foaming water.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on 5 in a row - Blythman at 23/10/2014 - 19:32

swarf
You have a PM

Comment by swarf posted on Probably selling most of my Pentax gear. at 23/10/2014 - 17:44

swarf
bforbes wrote:
#3
The intense colour and back lit clouds are great as are the reflections in the foreground.

Would anything be lost if you cropped off the really dark patches on the bottom edge?
I agree with Barrie - while I appreciate your response about keeping as much of the relfection as possible, I think that it would give the image a better balance.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on 5 in a row - Blythman at 22/10/2014 - 21:41

swarf
Alan

That's a really striking image - cleverly conceived and executed.

However, for me the 'Boots' logo really distracts and I would have cloned it out - even though some would say that removing it would 'distort the reality of the scene'. (There's also something unusual right in the bottom right hand corner of the image which our local judges would spot in an instant!)

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on 5 in a row - Blythman at 21/10/2014 - 22:32

swarf
#1 for me - it's super.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on River Kent Kayakers at 21/10/2014 - 18:22

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