swarf

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swarf
Not my sort of shot, but I can appreciate the charm. As others have noted - great timing and the colours are good also.

Now to nit-pick - the top of the reflection of the girls head just cuts the edge of the frame, does it clear it in the original? It is not unknown, down our way, for judges to criticise (at great length!) when this happens with a reflection, or a shadow, or anything else for that matter! (I said it was a nit-pick).

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on 5 in a Row - Fritzthedog at 07/11/2014 - 10:08

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Simon

One of your best sets - particularly for amusement value. I love Nos. 2 & 9 at the new Becketts Ford and I think that the driver in No. 3 had a tad too much under-steer dialed in!

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on Motorsport: Silverstone November 1-2 at 06/11/2014 - 22:00

swarf
Great colours in #2, although if I was to nit-pick I think that I would just lighten the plants outside the red house just a little.

#3 - lovely, gentle shot. The square format works for me, but like David I too can see some sort of artifact around the posts.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on 5 in a Row - Fritzthedog at 06/11/2014 - 09:16

swarf
I'm happy to give it a few days to get used to the look of it, as change is often a 'challenge'!!

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on New look forum at 05/11/2014 - 18:14

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Carl

I really love monochrome and that's a fine example of how it can add to the atmosphere - a cracking start.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on 5 in a Row - Fritzthedog at 03/11/2014 - 22:44

swarf
I've a quick play and it seems to be fairly straightforward and better than doing it in Elements (my other option); BUT I haven't had a proper go with it yet, so I wouldn't like draw any conclusion other than it was free, so got to be worth a try.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on Photomatix HDR s/w -free download (until 9th Dec) at 01/11/2014 - 23:04

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Andrew

That's a cracking conclusion - I agree with everything that Simon and Gary have said. Lot's of interest in the foreground and the green bush really adds to the whole. Finally - just to top it off, you've got a lovely set of clouds.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on Five in a Row - Bwlchmawr at 31/10/2014 - 09:21

swarf
McGregNi wrote:

Personally, I would change the tonal balance somewhat ... There is a bright foreground zone which overpowers the centrally placed subject area, so I would tend to reduce brightness on the foreground stones and slightly boost midtones and contrast on the boat and people.
I agree with Nigel, but also with David "..a fine piece of photo journalism".

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on Five in a Row - Bwlchmawr at 30/10/2014 - 22:36

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Simon

I really like the silhouette, and as per usual your captions are spot-on.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on Just another motorsport weekend... at 30/10/2014 - 08:49

swarf
Good colours and and well constructed composition (nice clouds too!). However, I'm not sure about the boarder - it looks a little heavy to me.

Phil

Comment by swarf posted on Five in a Row - Bwlchmawr at 29/10/2014 - 15:34

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