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Comment by davidstorm posted on Sigma v Pentax longer lenses at 25/06/2014 - 23:09
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David
Comment by davidstorm posted on Pyrenees at 25/06/2014 - 23:05
The tilt has already been mentioned, this is quite severe and also the dark area in the top left. The other thing that distracts my eye are the overhanging branches at the centre-right top of the image, these are highlighted very brightly and draw my gaze immediately to this area. I must confess that overhanging unattached branches are a no-no for me, in this shot they are more prominent because of the lighting.
I don't have a problem with the processing overall which is different and interesting but the other items I have mentioned spoil this one for me.
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Comment by davidstorm posted on Monochrome at 24/06/2014 - 23:23
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Comment by davidstorm posted on A few from my recent visit to the Lakes at 24/06/2014 - 00:19
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Comment by davidstorm posted on Kingfisher at 23/06/2014 - 22:25
Too often shots like this end up being a mess of detail, but these aren't. I think this is due to the carefully judged use of aperture and the excellent compositions, using blocks of colour to let the eye wander over the images.
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Comment by davidstorm posted on Meadow flowers at 23/06/2014 - 22:23
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Comment by davidstorm posted on Photography exhibition at 23/06/2014 - 22:14
Thanks Guys. Am I right in saying that I cannot upload photos until I have been a member for 30 days?
Regarding your first image posted above, it's nice and sharp (as it should be) and the colours are well saturated but not too bright. There are a few simple things you could have done to improve it:
- The foreground is blocking the view to what is beyond, consequently there is nothing to lead the eye into the shot. Try to avoid taking landscape shots that have no 'lead-in' for the eye.
- There is too much featureless sky - if it had been filled with dramatic clouds it would be different, but for this one it doesn't warrant so much space
- I think it would have been better to go close to the fence so you could see above it and choose a view point that excluded this feature and had a vista into the distance. It's a good idea to include foreground detail, especially with a wide angle lens, but not if it is obscuring potentially more appealing things in the middle and far distance
Hope these comments are not too harsh for your first post, but you did ask!
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David
Comment by davidstorm posted on Hi from Scotland at 23/06/2014 - 21:49
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Comment by davidstorm posted on K3 at sunrise at 23/06/2014 - 21:07
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Comment by davidstorm posted on Where have the Butterflies gone? at 21/06/2014 - 23:35


Personally I don't find the lack of zoom too much of an issue as I normally carry two cameras and use a shorter zoom lens on the second body.
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David