Here's one more:



what do you think?

Yep. Portraits, primarily.
I've got lenses that do the 100mm, but f2.8, and what is it 8 or 9 aperture blades?....

Bokeh, sharpness, low light, easy manual focus. All good portrait lens qualities. I didn't even mention the telephoto compression thing, (ie making a nose look smaller).

All Good!

But I will grab some macros when I can!

I got my new portrait lens today. You might recognize it as a macro lens.
so I thought I'd try it out and post a couple of my first tries with the 100mm macro.
I know, I know, not quite up to Clarkys standards, but maybe in a couple days, I'll get some better shots.......

I don't know if I seemed harsh....
but the images posted here just don't work for me.

in the first image,
there are three things that hit me right away, for example:
the red gelled light in the background, see the gel in the second image? it would've worked better on the first image, because of the detialed lace poking through her black dress. The wall behind her her is distracting to me, and there appears to be something drippping off her elbo.
add to that the head position.. a slight turn of the head, (or less contrast on the face) and here eyes wouldn't have to compete with her nose for attention.

the second image:
A slight reposition on the background light, would've eliminated the distracting glare off the tv, and a fill card filled the shadow causing the dark ring under her eyes. a simple "PSST" might've got kitty looking at the camera.

third image:
Don't ever make a womans legs look fat! simple re-pose. ( "Hey Beautiful, kick your left leg up for me!"

fourth image... outtake for me.

fifth image...
even out the light on the background, reposition the flowers so the gapping hole in the boquet, reveals her mouth, and shoot it verticle or square, without cropping off her head.

Some posters seem to critique harder on some individuals and go easier on others. Understandable to critque them based on skill level of poster and be fair, So if Kemal is new, I hope he finds some useful tips in the critique, and takes no offence. But I just saw too many flaws, (in images that have lot's of potential)in these ones.
(If Mr hypothetical had posted these I suspect he would've been torn to shreds.)

There are too many for me. I find it easier to critique one image or to "Help" out on a specific problem area.

But I'll try to offer some general advice...

one area that you could look at is controlling the light.

Bright hotspots draw the eye... good if you're making that area a focal point... not so good if it draws away from the subject.

Have you tried building your shot, by metering, or test shooting each light seperately?

How much planning are you putting into light ratios, and contrast?

Where are your shadows etc.


I'll throw one in here as an example.....





here Iv'e built up the shot, starting with a gridded snoot on my male subject to bring out some ruggedness, and texture in his face, carefully aimed to keep detial in his eyes.

She is lit with a large gridded reflector to give a softer light (but controlled), she is slightly overexposed to blow out some skin blemishes, the brought back on processing to even out her exposure with his.

there is a backlight (softbox) to seperate them from a black wall.

no spill, no odd shadows, or uneven backdrops.

no fancy photoshop work either, just a little burning, and highlight recovery.

another thing to check out (on the g9) is video.
the thing does surprisingly good video!
get the g9, leave your video cam at home, and have the k10 also!

use the g9 to video an inroduction at each locale on your travels, and use those clips along with your stills to make a multimedia dvd!

I loved my canon g5.

the g9 is highly regarded.

doesn't handle like a dslr, but the images compete with dslrs!

get used to composing on the lcd screen!

get the external flash to go with it! (although, the pentax flashes will work in manual or "a" modes... with a non-ttl hotshoe-to-pc cord rig between the flash and camera.

manfrotto superclamps.

too many uses to list.

It's a Jelly mold!

very warm toned....but I like it just the way it is, I wouldn't change it.