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Comment by davidstorm posted on Swanage Harbour, an Overview at 11/09/2014 - 23:54
I think these are head and shoulders above the set you posted of Swanage Harbour, the colours are better, the compositions are better and the light is better. The only slight negative for me is that they look a little over-sharpened, probably fine for printing but a bit too edgy on my monitor.
The first four are all good with my favourites being 3 and 4.
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David
Comment by davidstorm posted on Poole Harbour ... Dawn at 11/09/2014 - 21:01
There are some lovely angles with good light - I think the best shot is 8. Long and Winding Road, which is so well laid out, but has a very good tonal balance. 7. Spiderman is weaker I think tonally - I'd reduce the sky brightness a bit, and see if there's extra highlights to pull out from the distant ground areas. 5. Preparing the Ropes is a striking image, although in a rather unnatural way - the infocus centre areas look a little too sharp - the people certainly do, at least for this web size display - and the woman with the blue top looking your way does not look very impressed with what you're up to!
What a fantastic set of landscapes David. You and your colleagues who live in and around the Derbyshire Peak District are doing a fantastic job for the local Tourist Board.
Sheffield was my dad's birthplace and when I was a little boy, aged six, I stayed with an aunt and older cousin (he was 12) in Fullwood at Sheffield. One day he took me on a walk over the hills to Hathersage in Derbyshire. It was a great adventure but it seemed a very long walk and when we got there I was totally exhausted. We came back to Sheffield by train.
David
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David
Comment by davidstorm posted on A Set From The Edge at 11/09/2014 - 20:31
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David
Comment by davidstorm posted on Five in a row at 11/09/2014 - 20:14
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David
Comment by davidstorm posted on CPL & manual lens at 11/09/2014 - 20:13
What was the intention? ... I used the lens to capture a big space encompassing a naturally rounded and curvey environment, a capture that would display all the key elements visable to a bystander glancing around and give a sense of the character of the place. I expected the viewer, as I did myself, to accept the effects caused by the lens, which exaggerate the shapes of the objects and natural bay curvature, and take it all in without demanding a physically / geometrically accurate reproduction ..... the reponse I quoted from John suggests that was the way they were in fact interpreted .... ?
BTW, I think Mr. B's image above is an excellent result, but it must have taken a lot of work to get it like that.
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David
Comment by davidstorm posted on Swanage Harbour, an Overview at 11/09/2014 - 20:11
To me, the images in this thread demonstrate how important it is to get things as right as possible 'in camera'. I know the distortions are the result of the lens, but if the objective of the shot is to take landscape shots and not intentionally distorted images, then the right tools must be used in the first place, as anything else ends up being an unacceptable compromise, as Algi's corrections demonstrate above.
I can't agree with John's comments:
.. they have a really good feel for the subject matter.
I agree with JVS in that you simply cannot produce an acceptable image where it looks as though a body of water is pouring out of the left hand side, unless it is a waterfall or an abstract shot, neither of which these images are.
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David
Comment by davidstorm posted on Swanage Harbour, an Overview at 11/09/2014 - 13:24
1. Back From The Edge (balloons in the distance)

2. On Top Of The World

3. Last Shot of The Day

4. Fences and Puddles

5. Preparing The Ropes

6. Water On The Edge

7. Spiderman

8. Long and Winding Road

9. Along The Edge

10. Walkers and Climber

CC Welcomed.
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David
Comment by davidstorm posted on A Set From The Edge at 11/09/2014 - 00:13
I am very impressed with both the website and the quality of the work presented on it. Superb stuff.
I had no 'juddering' or any other issues, I suspect this is as much down to the internet connection and the PC being used to view the website as it is to anything else.
Best wishes
David
Comment by davidstorm posted on NEW WEBSITE at 10/09/2014 - 20:24
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David
Comment by davidstorm posted on Five in a row at 10/09/2014 - 20:12


If I'd angled the camera to make the water straight on this one, the building would have ended up like .... Well, Leaning Tower of Pisa wouldn't even begin to describe it !
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David