Sombre & Reflective
by davidstorm
My son, Daniel.
Shot on a steam train carriage on the Bodmin & Wenford Railway in Cornwall.
Pentax DA L 18-55mm.
Shot on a steam train carriage on the Bodmin & Wenford Railway in Cornwall.
Pentax DA L 18-55mm.
Uploaded15/11/2011 - 23:35
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Posted 16/11/2011 - 08:43
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Very nice capture and mood- all the better for being in b/w.
The 18-55 is a cracking lens !
The 18-55 is a cracking lens !
Posted 16/11/2011 - 11:23
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Listening to music. All young needs to listen to music. When I travel by train I need to look at around. Young and old need to use different sense. This is the opposite of Evolution (IMHO) that brought human beings to escape from darkness just developing eyes and their brain...so becoming able to fight(!)to hunt to eat to write poems and to travel into the space.(by the way: to take photos using Pentax).
Posted 16/11/2011 - 12:55
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Lovely candid photo David.
Posted 16/11/2011 - 17:50
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Nice composition, good lights. But you should clone out the window on the left side IMHO. Then his face would get more emphasis.
Posted 16/11/2011 - 20:32
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Excellent study David and well converted
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Posted 17/11/2011 - 00:17
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Thank you all for your comments.
Best wishes, David
szgabor wrote:
Nice composition, good lights. But you should clone out the window on the left side IMHO. Then his face would get more emphasis.
I did think about cloning the window out, but as I know the picture was taken in a train carriage and means something to me, I could not do this! Gabor is right from an artistic point of view, but I will leave the window in the picture.Nice composition, good lights. But you should clone out the window on the left side IMHO. Then his face would get more emphasis.
Best wishes, David
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