stream/waterfall shot
Posted 17/03/2010 - 14:05
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It's looks like a good shot, wish I'd taken it Lovely colours. A bigger version would be good! I might have cropped out the path on the left to make the river run more from left to right.
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Posted 17/03/2010 - 14:07
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Hm, I actually took the bigger version off and replaced it with a smaller one - the other one looked toooooo big for here. And also I keep having stupid run-ins with a particular moderator on another pentax forum and I didn't want to push things here with a huge image. I tried editing it but my editing time has run out - you can click through to the larger version on Flickr though.
Totally agree on what you're saying, that's one of the annoyances I have with it - it needs more on the right and less on the left for me. And the camera needs to be lower. And I need something more interesting in the foreground. And... =)
Totally agree on what you're saying, that's one of the annoyances I have with it - it needs more on the right and less on the left for me. And the camera needs to be lower. And I need something more interesting in the foreground. And... =)
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Posted 17/03/2010 - 14:18
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The forum software here should scale down any image you post to 800 wide - although it still downloads the full size version, so don't post a 1 megabyte jpeg Flickr's 1024 pixel 'medium' size works reasonably well.
The click through to Flickr doesn't work unfortunately. I haven't found a way to hyperlink an image on this forum.
The click through to Flickr doesn't work unfortunately. I haven't found a way to hyperlink an image on this forum.
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Posted 17/03/2010 - 16:48
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Not sure a polariser would help here except for adding to your exposure time which may be a good thing if you wanted the water to look even smoother. I think it's a great shot with good shadown detail (could have been a problem deep in the woods)
You're being unduly harsh: there's plenty of foreground interest, in my opinion and the path actually accentuates the line of the river and leads the eye nicely through the image.
Best wishes,
Andrew
You're being unduly harsh: there's plenty of foreground interest, in my opinion and the path actually accentuates the line of the river and leads the eye nicely through the image.
Best wishes,
Andrew
Best wishes,
Andrew
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Andrew
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Posted 17/03/2010 - 17:20
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Quote:
The forum software here should scale down any image you post to 800 wide - although it still downloads the full size version, so don't post a 1 megabyte jpeg Flickr's 1024 pixel 'medium' size works reasonably well.
The click through to Flickr doesn't work unfortunately. I haven't found a way to hyperlink an image on this forum.
But if you do this we have to scroll from side to side and the resizing affects the quality. Much better to resize in Photoshop and upload the correct size to Photobucket. Don't let Photobucket resize either, it's not as good a result.
The forum software here should scale down any image you post to 800 wide - although it still downloads the full size version, so don't post a 1 megabyte jpeg Flickr's 1024 pixel 'medium' size works reasonably well.
The click through to Flickr doesn't work unfortunately. I haven't found a way to hyperlink an image on this forum.
Best regards, John
Posted 17/03/2010 - 17:25
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To experiment with the flowing water effect the use of a Neutral Density Filter is desirable.
A Polariser helps to reduce reflections and also reduces exposure.
You can us 2 Polarisers and if you rotate them in different directions, you can eliminate all light by varying degrees.
On your photo, I think your exposure is quite pleasing and the water effect is rather nice. The source of the stream is however, in the centre and would be better on the upper left third. I would also try and avoid or overcome, the highlights of the sky shining through the trees. A crop on the left and on the top, would possibly improve the composition.
A Polariser helps to reduce reflections and also reduces exposure.
You can us 2 Polarisers and if you rotate them in different directions, you can eliminate all light by varying degrees.
On your photo, I think your exposure is quite pleasing and the water effect is rather nice. The source of the stream is however, in the centre and would be better on the upper left third. I would also try and avoid or overcome, the highlights of the sky shining through the trees. A crop on the left and on the top, would possibly improve the composition.
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Graham
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Posted 17/03/2010 - 20:06
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How about this crop?

I'll delete the file if you want.
If you have the RAW file still (if you shoot RAW) you could try using the recover slider to tone down the burnt out highlights. Failing that, some very careful cloning/patching would work too (I was just too lazy to try it myself).
K.

I'll delete the file if you want.
If you have the RAW file still (if you shoot RAW) you could try using the recover slider to tone down the burnt out highlights. Failing that, some very careful cloning/patching would work too (I was just too lazy to try it myself).
K.
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Posted 17/03/2010 - 21:21
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I do not like the frame on the original image, it detracts to much (IMO)Wombles crop makes the shot much better.
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Posted 17/03/2010 - 21:27
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Super crop, Kris.
Completely chnages the feel and flow of the original.
I also still like the original: just shows what cropping can do for an image.
Regards,
Andrew
Completely chnages the feel and flow of the original.
I also still like the original: just shows what cropping can do for an image.
Regards,
Andrew
Best wishes,
Andrew
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Andrew
"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
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Posted 17/03/2010 - 21:54
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I tried that, but threw it out because of that stone in the bottom left which annoyed me "sitting in space". But, coming back to it, it looks good. Really I should just have had more of the right hand side in it, been lower and about 50 cm further forward - but I'll get to that when I go back in the summer
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Posted 18/03/2010 - 00:40
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A polariser would have taken the shine off some of the foliage (ivy in the tree left hand side for instance, and perhaps increased the depth of colour in the water), but for me the main thing would be to exclude the sky, I don't like the bright highlights here.
And I think there's a drop of water on the lens, right hand side, where the bare thin tree trunk is.
Dan
And I think there's a drop of water on the lens, right hand side, where the bare thin tree trunk is.
Dan
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Posted 18/03/2010 - 01:41
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I really like this image, only aspect I dont like is the stick in the foreground.
C&C welcome.
Don.
Don.
Posted 18/03/2010 - 09:38
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johnriley wrote:
It used to be that we had to scroll side to side, but sometime a few months ago it got 'fixed' so the forum will now resize any larger images down to 800 wide. I've been posting 1024 wide for quite a while now, including in the fortnightlies.Quote:
The forum software here should scale down any image you post to 800 wide - although it still downloads the full size version, so don't post a 1 megabyte jpeg Flickr's 1024 pixel 'medium' size works reasonably well.
The click through to Flickr doesn't work unfortunately. I haven't found a way to hyperlink an image on this forum.
But if you do this we have to scroll from side to side and the resizing affects the quality. Much better to resize in Photoshop and upload the correct size to Photobucket. Don't let Photobucket resize either, it's not as good a result.The forum software here should scale down any image you post to 800 wide - although it still downloads the full size version, so don't post a 1 megabyte jpeg Flickr's 1024 pixel 'medium' size works reasonably well.
The click through to Flickr doesn't work unfortunately. I haven't found a way to hyperlink an image on this forum.
I've tried Photobucket, and I much prefer Flickr. Far fewer adverts for one thing (it might even be zero, I cannot recall any ads, but I'm a paying member and perhaps they only show ads to the free members). I also find it has a much busier community aspect. Also Flickr hasn't had all these virus scares.
The Flickr API is also much better (does Photobucket even have one?), so you can have widgets on your webpage, or build full-on web apps like Fluidr.
Tim
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Feel free to edit any of my posted photos! If I post a photo for critique, I want brutal honesty. If you don't like it, please say so and tell me why!
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Stuff - Metz 58 AF1, Cactus v4, Nikon SB24, Raynox 150, Sigma 1.4x TC, Sigma 2x TC, Kenko 2x macro TC, Redsnapper 283 tripod, iMac 27, Macbook Pro 17, iPad, iPhone 3G
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I took this and it's ok I suppose, but for the purposes of this thread I really wanted to pick your collective brains about stream/waterfall photography (I hope that this is the right place for that?). Specifically, what sort of exposure times are we looking at for that silky, delicate flowing water look without burning out the highlights (I guess it'd depend on the stream, its flow), and also are there any tricks to be aware of. For example it struck me that using a polariser next time might be a good thing. Anyone have any experience with this sort of stuff they care to share?
Thanks!