some of my new favourites
Posted 14/03/2007 - 15:50
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And so you should be... I'm happy!
Nice shots...
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Posted 14/03/2007 - 16:12
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too right! I like very much the tree shot, really brilliant details.
Posted 14/03/2007 - 17:30
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I agree,
the tree shot is great.. lovely tones throughout..
Cheers
Liam
the tree shot is great.. lovely tones throughout..
Cheers
Liam
Liam
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"Make your hands respond to what your mind demands." Jesse James
Best wide-angle lens? Two steps backward. Look for the 'ah-ha'. Ernst Haas
Posted 14/03/2007 - 21:52
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love the monochrome one - great tonal values - what was your workflow? , think the other one is a bit too colured i'm afraid.
Ken
“We must avoid however, snapping away, shooting quickly and without thought, overloading ourselves with unnecessary images that clutter our memory and diminish the clarity of the whole.” - Henri Cartier-Bresson -
“We must avoid however, snapping away, shooting quickly and without thought, overloading ourselves with unnecessary images that clutter our memory and diminish the clarity of the whole.” - Henri Cartier-Bresson -
Posted 14/03/2007 - 23:34
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I like them too, but I cant let it go without finding fault, well not really a fault but something I think will improve the tree image.
Try cloning out the figure on the left just above the dog, that light patch just in front of that figure, that white spot on the right of the tree trunk and that white spot in the lower right corner, and move the dog to the other side of the tree.
I know it sounds like nitpicking but just do it and see.
Try cloning out the figure on the left just above the dog, that light patch just in front of that figure, that white spot on the right of the tree trunk and that white spot in the lower right corner, and move the dog to the other side of the tree.
I know it sounds like nitpicking but just do it and see.
Posted 15/03/2007 - 07:23
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love the monochrome one - great tonal values - what was your workflow? , think the other one is a bit too colured i'm afraid.
I shoot in raw, using .pef at the moment. Download from camera to hardisk. bin crap shots. Import rest into Lightroom, bin crap shots.love the monochrome one - great tonal values - what was your workflow? , think the other one is a bit too colured i'm afraid.
Crop, if needed, adjust contrast, exposure. sharpen. change to mono, adjust colour if needed. export to web.
Please call me aj,
I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)
http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery
I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)
http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery
Posted 15/03/2007 - 07:27
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I like them too, but I cant let it go without finding fault, well not really a fault but something I think will improve the tree image.
Try cloning out the figure on the left just above the dog, that light patch just in front of that figure, that white spot on the right of the tree trunk and that white spot in the lower right corner, and move the dog to the other side of the tree.
I know it sounds like nitpicking but just do it and see.
thanks for the critique, but apart from maybe cloning out dust spots from the sky, I don't really want to remove bits of any of my images, it's just not the way think or want to work.I like them too, but I cant let it go without finding fault, well not really a fault but something I think will improve the tree image.
Try cloning out the figure on the left just above the dog, that light patch just in front of that figure, that white spot on the right of the tree trunk and that white spot in the lower right corner, and move the dog to the other side of the tree.
I know it sounds like nitpicking but just do it and see.
I liked this pic just because the man and dog were separated.
Please call me aj,
I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)
http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery
I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)
http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery
Posted 15/03/2007 - 09:48
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it's just not the way think or want to work.
Very commendable sir!, the "This is what I saw so this is what I took" approach, "I dont want to cheat" it's just not the way think or want to work.
I used to think like that myself, still do to a degree, but now work on the principle that its the final image that counts.
I would draw the line at moving the tree for instance, or shifitng the buildings around, but elements that could have been "moved around" by waiting for the right moment are in my opinion "fair game"
Please note that I wasn't trying to tell you what your images should look like, just making a point of what you could watch out for in the future to (IMHO) improve on composition.
Just try the cloning suggestions and see the change, you dont have to keep it (you might have a point about the dog though )
Posted 15/03/2007 - 14:47
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Try cloning out the figure on the left just above the dog
I think this is one of the crucial and most successful parts of the picture! Background echoing the forground. You find it a lot in Cartier-Bresson's work
Try cloning out the figure on the left just above the dog
Ken
“We must avoid however, snapping away, shooting quickly and without thought, overloading ourselves with unnecessary images that clutter our memory and diminish the clarity of the whole.” - Henri Cartier-Bresson -
“We must avoid however, snapping away, shooting quickly and without thought, overloading ourselves with unnecessary images that clutter our memory and diminish the clarity of the whole.” - Henri Cartier-Bresson -
Posted 15/03/2007 - 15:40
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I used to think like that myself, still do to a degree, but now work on the principle that its the final image that counts.
I've tried that with a few images in the past, i found it an interesting exercise to get a sunrise in focus and also a foreground gnarly post in focus. I'm sort of pleased with the final image but.... I think I feel I have 'cheated'. this is not a comment on other people's images, just not happy to do it with my own.Quote:
it's just not the way think or want to work.
Very commendable sir!, the "This is what I saw so this is what I took" approach, "I dont want to cheat" it's just not the way think or want to work.
I used to think like that myself, still do to a degree, but now work on the principle that its the final image that counts.
I'n not averse to changing colours about quite drastically though!
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I would draw the line at moving the tree for instance, or shifitng the buildings around, but elements that could have been "moved around" by waiting for the right moment are in my opinion "fair game"
Please note that I wasn't trying to tell you what your images should look like, just making a point of what you could watch out for in the future to (IMHO) improve on composition.
No worries.I would draw the line at moving the tree for instance, or shifitng the buildings around, but elements that could have been "moved around" by waiting for the right moment are in my opinion "fair game"
Please note that I wasn't trying to tell you what your images should look like, just making a point of what you could watch out for in the future to (IMHO) improve on composition.
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Just try the cloning suggestions and see the change, you dont have to keep it (you might have a point about the dog though )
More images here: http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery/
Just try the cloning suggestions and see the change, you dont have to keep it (you might have a point about the dog though )
Please call me aj,
I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)
http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery
I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)
http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery
Posted 15/03/2007 - 15:44
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I like both images - always wanted one like that of the Seven Bridge but how do you get it without being run over :
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Posted 15/03/2007 - 19:49
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I like both images - always wanted one like that of the Seven Bridge but how do you get it without being run over :
Well, this was taken through the windscreen. My wife was driving. I was snapping away.
I like both images - always wanted one like that of the Seven Bridge but how do you get it without being run over :
Please call me aj,
I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)
http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery
I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)
http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery
Posted 15/03/2007 - 19:54
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Um.... yeah... well spotted, deliberate use of Cartier- wosname's echo technique.... yeah! Quote:
Try cloning out the figure on the left just above the dog
I think this is one of the crucial and most successful parts of the picture! Background echoing the forground. You find it a lot in Cartier-Bresson's workTry cloning out the figure on the left just above the dog
Good aren't I?
I didn't even notice he/she was there! I was watching the man and dog out walking together-separately.
Please call me aj,
I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)
http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery
I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)
http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery
Posted 15/03/2007 - 19:58
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I really like the bridge shot. Very punchy.
And the man and his dog is OK, too. Keep in the chap on the left, I say.
Keep 'em coming.
G
And the man and his dog is OK, too. Keep in the chap on the left, I say.
Keep 'em coming.
G
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I'm happy!
I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)
http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery