RAF Cosford
Posted 02/11/2009 - 10:06
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Very nice. Lovely contrast between the curved wall and the quite jarring angular fire escape.
Obviously if I had designed it they would have just had a hatch in the curved part and escapees could just slide down the wall!
Obviously if I had designed it they would have just had a hatch in the curved part and escapees could just slide down the wall!
Tim
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Posted 03/11/2009 - 13:54
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I love this very graphic shot. One suggestion though, perhaps try cropping a bit more from the right hand side? The little bit of drainpipe (?) in the corner distracts a bit.
Best wishes, Kris.
Best wishes, Kris.
Kris Lockyear
It is an illusion that photos are made with the camera they are made with the eye, heart and head. Henri Cartier-Bresson
Lots of film bodies, a couple of digital ones, too many lenses (mainly older glass) and a Horseman LE 5x4.
It is an illusion that photos are made with the camera they are made with the eye, heart and head. Henri Cartier-Bresson
Lots of film bodies, a couple of digital ones, too many lenses (mainly older glass) and a Horseman LE 5x4.
Posted 03/11/2009 - 14:06
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I like the composition and arrangement of this photo. However, I think that the photo could be improved, by some work to bring out the detail in the sky. The sky has many lines in it that are at 90 degrees to the corrugations in the building. In my opinion if the sky was enhanced this would lift the whole picture.
Friendly Regards
Graham
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