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Posted 12/11/2010 - 17:49
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I like the image very much, looks like a powerful and atmospheric portrait.
My only question is about writing in images. I find myself reading the writing and that is taking my eye away from the subject. Unless it's relevant to the sitter in some way I would clone it out.
My only question is about writing in images. I find myself reading the writing and that is taking my eye away from the subject. Unless it's relevant to the sitter in some way I would clone it out.
Best regards, John
Posted 12/11/2010 - 17:57
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Well, coming from JR, I'll take that as high praise indeed. Thank you.
The writing is relevant actually. I may be using this one for an ad for next year, haven't decided yet...
I managed to save my image then post it with an error, the top layer was off so the first post actually shows some flaws I later cleaned up, just little details in the skin, hard to see in the web sized, but visible in the print.
The writing is relevant actually. I may be using this one for an ad for next year, haven't decided yet...
I managed to save my image then post it with an error, the top layer was off so the first post actually shows some flaws I later cleaned up, just little details in the skin, hard to see in the web sized, but visible in the print.
Fired many shots. Didn't kill anything.
Posted 12/11/2010 - 18:03
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I noticed the writing too, but I've seen that strange tag line on your other photos and assumed it was your watermark. I thought it was a very clever watermark
Edit: nice pic btw, great lighting and colours.
Edit: nice pic btw, great lighting and colours.
Tim
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MF - Vivitar CF 28/2.8, Tamron AD2 90/2.5, MTO 1000/11
Stuff - Metz 58 AF1, Cactus v4, Nikon SB24, Raynox 150, Sigma 1.4x TC, Sigma 2x TC, Kenko 2x macro TC, Redsnapper 283 tripod, iMac 27”, Macbook Pro 17”, iPad, iPhone 3G
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Feel free to edit any of my posted photos! If I post a photo for critique, I want brutal honesty. If you don't like it, please say so and tell me why!
Posted 12/11/2010 - 18:09
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thoughton wrote:
I noticed the writing too, but I've seen that strange tag line on your other photos and assumed it was your watermark. I thought it was a very clever watermark
Edit: nice pic btw, great lighting and colours.
it is.
I noticed the writing too, but I've seen that strange tag line on your other photos and assumed it was your watermark. I thought it was a very clever watermark
Edit: nice pic btw, great lighting and colours.
Fired many shots. Didn't kill anything.
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