overcooked?
Posted 18/07/2010 - 17:12
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Looks OK to me Ken, though I dont like the grey area on the background, I think it needs to be all one colour, with the exception of the shadows under the girl of course.
PS theres also a funny sqiggle botton right.
PS theres also a funny sqiggle botton right.
Posted 18/07/2010 - 17:41
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Not in the least over-cooked, Ken. A very nicely exposed shot with lots of "punch". I don't even mind the sloping presentation which in not something that normally appeals. I wish I could take flash pictures as skilfully.
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Andrew
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Andrew
"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
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http://s927.photobucket.com/home/ADC3440/index
https://www.flickr.com/photos/78898196@N05
Posted 18/07/2010 - 22:52
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Looks good Ken, no problems at all with her. Background could do with a bit of a clean up though
Tim
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Posted 19/07/2010 - 21:54
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Love it; with the exception of the grey parts in the background.
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