Nigel's First Stranger Shots
Could you engage the subjects a little more?
p.s. #4 is the best image here IMHO - something about the strap - but would be even better with a tiny bit more space at the top?
Tim
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They clearly work best as a set, rather than individual images. So I'm wondering, once the novelty wears off, whether a collage of maybe the first six (since the last two seem to be different framings of the same models as the first two) of these might give you a single large image that will be a bit more durable in terms of impact and appeal. It would need to be printed, though - at web sizes the whole thing would be harder to get the full impact.
Not sure what a six-image triptych (sextych?) is called, but when I say collage, I don't necessarily mean overlapping. I'm not volunteering to arrange them!!
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Number 3 image composition; I thinks it's right though as you have offset the 'neck' from centre, my eyes wants to see a bit more of the 'shoulder' area
Andy
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I think they're great
Steve
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A great idea, Nigel. Very quirky and original.
That was the idea! A different take on the 'strangers' theme


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A bit worried these first efforts might look a bit rigid or wooden, but guess its down to 'practice practice & practice'. Hopefully if I head back sometime soon I might find them there again.
All with the K7 & Tamron Adaptall 135mm f2.8, all at f4.0. As always, C & Cs most welcome!
Thanks for checking them out
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