did it work?

ems82
Posted 06/08/2009 - 10:22 Link
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did it work?
Emma
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Mannesty
Posted 06/08/2009 - 10:40 Link
No it didn't work.
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mikew
Posted 06/08/2009 - 11:16 Link
I don't think it worked either. Way too gloomy although there was some potential there. The composition looked OK but the exposure was always going to be a problem and compromise.

Mike
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Mannesty
Posted 06/08/2009 - 11:19 Link
Perhaps I misunderstood the OP. I thought the "Did it work?" was referring to "Does the image show?", which it doesn't. I haven't reviewed the image.

EDIT: Now I have, and I agree with mikew, way too gloomy & dark. Maybe it can be rescued though.
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Edited by Mannesty: 06/08/2009 - 11:20
ems82
Posted 06/08/2009 - 11:28 Link
that was what i was asking mannesty 'did it show' but i was actually trying to get the photo up of my london skyline not the tree i totally agree with you on that one but cant seem to make it better
Emma
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mikew
Posted 06/08/2009 - 11:34 Link
Beg pardon, as usual I managed to misunderstand the simplest thing
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ems82
Posted 06/08/2009 - 11:37 Link
its ok mike got any suggestions on making the tree better
Emma
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George Lazarette
Posted 06/08/2009 - 11:42 Link
mikew wrote:
Beg pardon, as usual I managed to misunderstand the simplest thing
You're probably better with complicated things.

G
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mikew
Posted 06/08/2009 - 11:44 Link
You won't like them

Personally and this very personal

Lose the vignette
Clone out the metal sign at foot of tree
Then the big problem is the second tree behind the bank
Normally I wouldn't think of cloning it out but given the sepia conversion which does look nice you might get away with it with oodles of patience!

I can see what attracted you to the tree it's a great shape

Looking at your other photographs you have some lovely shots in there, Reeds, Run Freely, Woolich amongst others. You quite like frames don't you? I can't stand them but I guess they are effective sometimes.

Mike
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mikew
Posted 06/08/2009 - 11:46 Link
George, I can only hope so!
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ems82
Posted 06/08/2009 - 11:56 Link
ok cheers mike ill give it a go i cant put individual pics on here wont let me i wanted peoples opionon on london skyline i took yesterday im very happy with it
Emma
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mikew
Posted 06/08/2009 - 12:00 Link
You can use the image button anywhere in the text to enclose a url to display an image in a post. It just takes a couple of goes to get it to work.

I don't think the skyline is anywhere near as good as some of your other shots.

Mike
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Edited by mikew: 06/08/2009 - 12:01
ems82
Posted 06/08/2009 - 12:02 Link
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Emma
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Coriander
Posted 06/08/2009 - 12:37 Link
Hi Ems82,
Took the liberty of a quick, rough and ready alteration to your pic, to show what could be recovered. Hope you don't mind...
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mikew
Posted 06/08/2009 - 13:36 Link
Coriander - I hope you won't be hurt but I prefer Ems version!

I would hope she could draw a little more out of the sky and get some light into the buildings but from what has been said I think Ems is well pleased with the effect obtained originally.

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