Comedy of Errors
Posted 02/03/2009 - 22:04
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I like the composition, but I think it's a little dark ( on my monitor ). I think it needs to be just a little lighter on the face of the girl on the left . ( IMHO )
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Pentax K3ii, Pentax K10d, Kit lens ( 18-55mm ), 50mm f1.7 lens, Tamron 70-300mm lens, Prinzflex 70-162 manual lens, Various old flashes.
Pentax K3ii, Pentax K10d, Kit lens ( 18-55mm ), 50mm f1.7 lens, Tamron 70-300mm lens, Prinzflex 70-162 manual lens, Various old flashes.
Posted 02/03/2009 - 22:06
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Father Ted wrote:
I like the composition, but I think it's a little dark ( on my monitor ). I think it needs to be just a little lighter on the face of the girl on the left . ( IMHO )
I agree she is a little in the dark but overall the shot is ok
I like the composition, but I think it's a little dark ( on my monitor ). I think it needs to be just a little lighter on the face of the girl on the left . ( IMHO )
Tel,
Posted 03/03/2009 - 12:57
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Great photo, you capture well the action in it.
Dave I like the coloured one better because of the red tie, if it was any other colour your B&W would be better if compared
Dave I like the coloured one better because of the red tie, if it was any other colour your B&W would be better if compared
Stefan
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Posted 03/03/2009 - 23:17
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Good to know I've someone behind me Dave
it might work quite well if you just leave the tie coloured and the rest black and white?
it might work quite well if you just leave the tie coloured and the rest black and white?
Stefan
K10D, K5
DA* 16-50, DA* 50-135, D-FA 100 Macro, DA 40 Ltd, DA 18-55
AF-540FGZ
K10D, K5
DA* 16-50, DA* 50-135, D-FA 100 Macro, DA 40 Ltd, DA 18-55
AF-540FGZ
Posted 04/03/2009 - 08:45
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Rob,
I like the shot. Yes, it is a bit dark but then I find that quite appealing. I did have a go at lightening it a bit in PS but that didn't add anything, so I find it good as is.
The flying tie does give a sense of action. The girl in the middle does have a convincing serious face. So either she was not happy with how the others were acting or she is quite good at it.
Prieni
I like the shot. Yes, it is a bit dark but then I find that quite appealing. I did have a go at lightening it a bit in PS but that didn't add anything, so I find it good as is.
The flying tie does give a sense of action. The girl in the middle does have a convincing serious face. So either she was not happy with how the others were acting or she is quite good at it.
Prieni
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