Comedy of Errors


ikillrocknroll

Link Posted 02/03/2009 - 21:40
Shot taken from a set of photos I took of a production of "The Comedy of Errors" by Shakespeare. (during a dress rehearsal, as official photographer ie, not from audience)



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Last Edited by ikillrocknroll on 02/03/2009 - 21:41

Father Ted

Link Posted 02/03/2009 - 22:04
I like the composition, but I think it's a little dark ( on my monitor ). I think it needs to be just a little lighter on the face of the girl on the left . ( IMHO )
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ttk

Link Posted 02/03/2009 - 22:06
Father Ted wrote:
I like the composition, but I think it's a little dark ( on my monitor ). I think it needs to be just a little lighter on the face of the girl on the left . ( IMHO )

I agree she is a little in the dark but overall the shot is ok
Tel,

Hardgravity

Link Posted 02/03/2009 - 22:40
Tried this,

Hope you don't mind.

I found the tie distracting and wanted to see the girl on the left.
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Anvh

Link Posted 03/03/2009 - 12:57
Great photo, you capture well the action in it.

Dave I like the coloured one better because of the red tie, if it was any other colour your B&W would be better if compared
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Hardgravity

Link Posted 03/03/2009 - 17:04
That's what my daughter said Stefan!
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Link Posted 03/03/2009 - 23:17
Good to know I've someone behind me Dave
it might work quite well if you just leave the tie coloured and the rest black and white?
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Prieni

Link Posted 04/03/2009 - 08:45
Rob,

I like the shot. Yes, it is a bit dark but then I find that quite appealing. I did have a go at lightening it a bit in PS but that didn't add anything, so I find it good as is.

The flying tie does give a sense of action. The girl in the middle does have a convincing serious face. So either she was not happy with how the others were acting or she is quite good at it.

Prieni
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