Cheeky monkey
Posted 10/06/2010 - 07:52
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It is a great shot - a funny moment in time.
I know it's already been cropped - but for me, I wonder if a heavier crop still might be in order to emphasise the expression - the tongue pulling.
It wasn't until I read the description that I noticed that tongue pulling was going on (however I am the most unobservant person in history), and the size of the preview isn't helping either.
If the shot can withstand it, I'd say go further in.
I know it's already been cropped - but for me, I wonder if a heavier crop still might be in order to emphasise the expression - the tongue pulling.
It wasn't until I read the description that I noticed that tongue pulling was going on (however I am the most unobservant person in history), and the size of the preview isn't helping either.
If the shot can withstand it, I'd say go further in.
Posted 10/06/2010 - 10:36
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Like the cheeky monk, Tim. The other monk avoiding having his mug shot bothers me a bit. As you know I have no problems taking candids of people but actually having someone in the shot clearly avoiding the camera usually doesn't work IMO. Not too keen on the context either - it's not the most inspiring backdrop.
Posted 10/06/2010 - 10:42
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Thanks for the comments folks.
Bob I will see if I can get any closer, this is about 6MP at the moment.
Dr M I agree about the first monk. He didn't actually see me it was just coincidence that he was looking the other way, but still quite annoying.
The backdrop is just some pedestrianised urban park area in downtown Hong Kong. Not very attractive I know, but I quite like the contrast of modern urban development with the timelessness of the monks in their robes. God I'm sounding like like some dodgy travel brochure now.
Bob I will see if I can get any closer, this is about 6MP at the moment.
Dr M I agree about the first monk. He didn't actually see me it was just coincidence that he was looking the other way, but still quite annoying.
The backdrop is just some pedestrianised urban park area in downtown Hong Kong. Not very attractive I know, but I quite like the contrast of modern urban development with the timelessness of the monks in their robes. God I'm sounding like like some dodgy travel brochure now.
Tim
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Just as I was taking this photo the monk stuck his tongue out at me!
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