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fatspider
Posted 09/06/2009 - 22:32 Link
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DOes this look better
Actually I think it does, but then again it doesn't, the wider format adds to the length of the plane, but I think the tarmac in the forground gave a better composition, but you misunderstood my suggestion anyway, just off centre in the foregound is a clump of lighter coloured grass, once I had seen it my eyes kept going back to it, it was that which I thought would be better cropped off, or maybe just darkened down to match the other grass:
Just nitpicking really, it is a super shot regardless.
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Posted 10/06/2009 - 11:37 Link
John,

Were you the dark haired one with a pentax?

Nice to speak to you again.

Matt
john941
Posted 10/06/2009 - 11:44 Link
That was me Mat. I'll probely meet you there again or at Barton which I intend to try after seeing it in your post.
Cheers John
Posted 10/06/2009 - 11:49 Link
Hi John,

Yeah Barton is brilliant. Lovely relaxing place with a control tower you can go up some steps to go to a platform where you can take some lovely landing shots.

Im going Barton next week some time if you fancy it?

Matt
Posted 10/06/2009 - 12:08 Link
This is the final edit of it. Lightened the bit of grass, removed some of the soil ont he grass and put a blue tint to the sky. I think it looks better now.

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Edited by Cloudhunter: 10/06/2009 - 12:15

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