Leading lights

by vejj

Da70 and a pack of tea lights
Liked by  pauljay autumnlight
Uploaded14/07/2015 - 00:15
CategoryStill Life
Shutter Speed1/25
Aperturef/2.4
LensN/A
ISO100
Focal Length70mm
Unique Views / Likes23/2

davidwozhere
Posted 14/07/2015 - 23:27 Link
Nice idea and nice execution but there is something sort of unbalanced about the composition of this one. The dark space to the left?, the break in the leading line of lights at Nos. 4 and 5?, the tight fit on the right side?
The massed reflections are particularly nice
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autumnlight
Posted 15/07/2015 - 22:07 Link
Very nice, like the focus on the second candle
vejj
Posted 16/07/2015 - 11:49 Link
davidwozhere wrote:
Nice idea and nice execution but there is something sort of unbalanced about the composition of this one. The dark space to the left?, the break in the leading line of lights at Nos. 4 and 5?, the tight fit on the right side?
The massed reflections are particularly nice
Thanks for the feedback, I will retry this shot taking these points into consideration
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