is this the crop you meant?
by BMurray
Uploaded01/03/2012 - 12:07
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Posted 01/03/2012 - 13:46
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Absolutely (as people say these days). Now you've a classy photograph. Doesn't the extreme crop work well? It actually looks like you were aiming for a less posed, environmental type shot.
Best wishes,
Andrew
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Andrew
"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
My website: http://www.ephotozine.com/user/bwlchmawr-199050
http://s927.photobucket.com/home/ADC3440/index
https://www.flickr.com/photos/78898196@N05
Posted 01/03/2012 - 14:54
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thanks andrew, i'll need to dedicate some time to learning photoshop and hopefully i can get the other shots looking better too.
B Murray
Posted 01/03/2012 - 17:04
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This is really good. Moving the lady off centre has really improved the composition and got rid of distractions.
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Graham
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Posted 01/03/2012 - 18:32
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Great pic now - very matrix!
Clare
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Posted 01/03/2012 - 18:51
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This is very good for all the above reasons, excellent
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Posted 03/03/2012 - 12:20
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Brian, when you follow Uncle Andrew's advice you won't go far wrong! The crop has turned an average shot into an excellent shot. Personally, I find the lady's sultry looks most appealing and thus she makes a fine subject!
Paul.
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