Poles

by bjolester

I have made a new version where I omitted some of the foreground water, thereby lowering the horizon. I believe this functions better. What do you think?
Uploaded10/02/2025 - 23:02
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davidwozhere
Posted 10/02/2025 - 23:18 Link
I think you are right. It now makes a fascinating contest to hold one's attention between the poles and the clouds. They are so well balanced neither of them can win!
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GIULIO57
Posted 11/02/2025 - 07:18 Link
I prefer previous version: it has more vertical slant and black areas in foreground enhace BW palette.
SSF1957
Posted 11/02/2025 - 08:05 Link
I prefer this version, it just feels more balanced
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LennyBloke
Posted 12/02/2025 - 16:10 Link
I kept looking at the other thinking it was almost there, now you've produced this one I can see what it needed - spot on for me
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bjolester
Posted 13/02/2025 - 20:45 Link
Thank you David, Giulio, Stephen and John for providing helpful insight and advice. Much appreciated.
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leep
Posted 14/02/2025 - 13:45 Link
Also very good. Personal choice would be this
bjolester
Posted 14/02/2025 - 17:02 Link
Thank you Lee! I agree about personal choice👍
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pauljay
Posted 14/02/2025 - 22:57 Link
I like them both!
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bjolester
Posted 14/02/2025 - 23:19 Link
Thank you Paul!
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