Marshland

by ems82

Uploaded29/03/2010 - 19:52
CategoryArchitecture
Shutter Speed1/180
Aperturef/16
LensN/A
ISO400
Focal Length55mm
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wadna
Posted 29/03/2010 - 20:40 Link
Was there a reason that you had to frame so tight on top? If there weren't any distractions there leaving a little more room would have worked better giving a greater feeling of depth.

Regards, Ian.
ems82
Posted 29/03/2010 - 21:10 Link
Thats the end of the walkway and the skyline was full of obstructions ugly buildings etc plus horrible sky
Emma
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wadna
Posted 30/03/2010 - 00:28 Link
ems82 wrote:
Thats the end of the walkway and the skyline was full of obstructions ugly buildings etc plus horrible sky
But there seems to be grass at the end.
ems82
Posted 30/03/2010 - 06:56 Link
Yes and just above the reeds is the horrible skyline maybe i should have cropped before the reeds at end:
Emma
"Photography is a way of feeling, of touching, of loving. What you have caught on film is captured forever... it remembers little things, long after you have forgotten everything." Aaron Siskind
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grahamwalton
Posted 30/03/2010 - 12:12 Link
I like the simplicity of the colours and the perspective of this photo. I get a feeling of solitude.
I too, am looking for another element at the end of the bridge and there is'nt enough room. But I do like it as it is.
Another alternative would be to crop the top to the end of the bridge. Be careful not the leave a plant head cut in two on the left. This would then give a road to nowhere picture, which in my opinion would be quite powerful.
Friendly Regards
Graham
Edited by grahamwalton: 30/03/2010 - 12:13
wadna
Posted 30/03/2010 - 12:45 Link
ems82 wrote:
Yes and just above the reeds is the horrible skyline maybe i should have cropped before the reeds at end:
Well you could clone some grass in.
KatieW
Posted 30/03/2010 - 14:43 Link
Not sure what the answer is as far as a crop is concerned, but I do like this, for the same reasons as Graham - colours and perspective and it also has an artistic feel for me.
Regards
Katie
ems82
Posted 30/03/2010 - 16:06 Link
Thankyou Katie and Graham.
Emma
"Photography is a way of feeling, of touching, of loving. What you have caught on film is captured forever... it remembers little things, long after you have forgotten everything." Aaron Siskind
Bodies K20D, LTL 3, K1000d
Lenses Pentax 50mm, Pentax 135mm, Tamron 70-300 macro

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