Iron
by AxelLuther
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Uploaded24/07/2012 - 11:53
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Posted 25/07/2012 - 12:27
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I really like the composition between the rusty cylinders and vessels.
In my opinion:-
It is a pity that the pillar on the far left is so light.
It is also a pity that your angle of view could not include the top of the structure.
My suggestions would be to either change the colour or crop off the pillar on the left. Darkening the sky in top left, would make the top of the structure less obvious.
I like the image as it is, but feel the suggested alterations, would make it even better.
In my opinion:-
It is a pity that the pillar on the far left is so light.
It is also a pity that your angle of view could not include the top of the structure.
My suggestions would be to either change the colour or crop off the pillar on the left. Darkening the sky in top left, would make the top of the structure less obvious.
I like the image as it is, but feel the suggested alterations, would make it even better.
Friendly Regards
Graham
Graham
Posted 26/07/2012 - 12:36
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grahamwalton wrote:
I really like the composition between the rusty cylinders and vessels.
In my opinion:-
It is a pity that the pillar on the far left is so light.
It is also a pity that your angle of view could not include the top of the structure.
My suggestions would be to either change the colour or crop off the pillar on the left. Darkening the sky in top left, would make the top of the structure less obvious.
I like the image as it is, but feel the suggested alterations, would make it even better.
good points - I will try them out
I really like the composition between the rusty cylinders and vessels.
In my opinion:-
It is a pity that the pillar on the far left is so light.
It is also a pity that your angle of view could not include the top of the structure.
My suggestions would be to either change the colour or crop off the pillar on the left. Darkening the sky in top left, would make the top of the structure less obvious.
I like the image as it is, but feel the suggested alterations, would make it even better.
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Colors are the lack of darkness
You find more of my pictures here: https://pentaxphotogallery.com/artists/axelluther or on my web page: www.axel-luther.com
Colors are the lack of darkness
You find more of my pictures here: https://pentaxphotogallery.com/artists/axelluther or on my web page: www.axel-luther.com
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