Daydream (ver 2)

by WaypointCharlie

Reworked (geometry aligned and extended shadow). Cropping in the style of an album cover gives it a very different feel to the original version. Personally I prefer the original, but perhaps that says I'm more a sucker for clouds than women!

Both images: Pentax DA 18-250mm @ 18mm
Uploaded19/09/2014 - 11:15
CategoryLandscape / Travel
Shutter Speed1/80
Aperturef/8
LensN/A
ISO80
Focal Length18mm
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igorrro
Posted 19/09/2014 - 12:01 Link
Nice one!
I prefer cropp, model is more visible
A lot of equipment, but a little talent
Edited by igorrro: 19/09/2014 - 12:23
RussV
Posted 19/09/2014 - 12:01 Link
I prefer original too.
swarf
Posted 19/09/2014 - 12:26 Link
Very nice - I prefer the crop.

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Teaka53
Posted 19/09/2014 - 13:57 Link
I prefer this cropped version, Still a beautiful summers day
Malc
GIULIO57
Posted 19/09/2014 - 14:21 Link
I do prefer this version It perfect focuses on the model...Too sky is disturbing, IMHO
drobbia
Posted 19/09/2014 - 16:12 Link
The curves of the subject conflates with the straight lines of the field, holding interest - Color is tack sharp - VV nice - Shapely - Tg
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Bobbinalorry
Posted 19/09/2014 - 17:23 Link
Confused now! I like them both,
Best Regards, Larry.

All the gear & no idea.
bwlchmawr
Posted 19/09/2014 - 17:52 Link
A fine shot. Unusual and effective.
(Personally, given the choice, I prefer women to clouds, providing they're quiet and can cook.)
Best wishes,

Andrew

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davidtrout
Posted 20/09/2014 - 11:00 Link
Its a very good image. I much prefer this version to the previous one, the model fills the frame perfectly and it has more impact.
If the clouds stay quiet and are able to cook would you then prefer them to women Andrew?
David

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NaimKhan
Posted 20/09/2014 - 14:48 Link
I like them both.
autumnlight
Posted 20/09/2014 - 17:15 Link
Both images are good, i slightly prefer this one
drobbia
Posted 22/09/2014 - 21:57 Link
My wife disagrees but she is a heck of a cook and has opinions about Photographic excellence - she really like this image -Tony
bwlchmawr wrote:
A fine shot. Unusual and effective.
(Personally, given the choice, I prefer women to clouds, providing they're quiet and can cook.)
"It's not what you look at that's important, it's what you see" - Thoreau
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