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Before Her Debut

by gustavjin

Also shot in our company's annual dinner. She is a good singer with a clear voice.

Uploaded17/01/2011 - 07:58

CategoryPortraits / People

BodyPENTAX K20D

Shutter Speed1/45

ApertureN/A

LensN/A

ISO1600

Focal Length50mm

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Tagsdebut annual dinner

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Date Taken	09/01/2011 - 19:01
Make	PENTAX
Model	PENTAX K20D
Program Mode	Manual
Metering Mode	Center-weighted average
Shutter Speed	1/45
Aperture	N/A
ISO	1600
Focal Length	50mm
Lens	N/A

bwlchmawr bwlchmawr

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Posted 17/01/2011 - 20:05 Link

It's a potentially good shot and a great subject, but the framing is a let-down, in my opinion. You've cut her off at the shins the left big dead areas at the top. You've got lots of pixels to play with so I'd attempt a severe crop to focus on her more closely.

Hope you don't mind my comments: they are kindly meant.

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gustavjin gustavjin

16 years
Shanghai,
PR of China

Posted 18/01/2011 - 03:46 Link

bwlchmawr wrote:
It's a potentially good shot and a great subject, but the framing is a let-down, in my opinion. You've cut her off at the shins the left big dead areas at the top. You've got lots of pixels to play with so I'd attempt a severe crop to focus on her more closely.

Hope you don't mind my comments: they are kindly meant.

Thank you for your suggestion. Actually, I am not satisfied with this picture since what you see is what I shot and the time is not enough for me to get a second one. Therefore, I would reframe it as per your suggestions.