YET MORE stranger street portraits

Posted 29/03/2014 - 19:52 Link
Yet more Stranger Street Portraits

K-5 and the DA 50 135

Not hearing much from people about my portraits so guessing I am getting them right ok????
Always appreciate some feedback as its certainly helping


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davidstorm
Posted 29/03/2014 - 20:11 Link
These are 'right' to me Alistair, I particularly like the off-centre one, but all are pretty good and the first is verging on a stunner. The only slight negative would be the last one where the point of focus is on the moustache and not the eyes, but of course this may be intentional so I'm not going to presume this is wrong!

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Posted 29/03/2014 - 20:32 Link
Cheers Dave
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tyronet2000
Posted 29/03/2014 - 20:32 Link
Great eyes in the female portraits, but why for heavan's sake, do they need those bits of metal attached to their faces.
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Posted 29/03/2014 - 20:37 Link
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Blythman
Posted 29/03/2014 - 20:43 Link
tyronet2000 wrote:
Great eyes in the female portraits,)
Agree with Stan
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cabstar
Posted 29/03/2014 - 20:48 Link
Love the Facebook page and the little chats that go with the photos, I also prefer the image of the lady in number one on your Facebook page too.
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Posted 29/03/2014 - 20:56 Link
Thanks guys. .. yeah girls are really into metal these parts
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Galoot
Posted 29/03/2014 - 22:46 Link
Hi,

Just my 2-cents worth, but I'm not too sure you have the 'cropping' just right, a lot of the faces seem very tight in the frame.

No.4 seems the best to me, as she seems to have a little space.

I don't have a problem with going in even tighter, but you would need something to highlight as a point of focus.

These images remind me a little of passport pictures.

For example, I got close for this one, and the wee lad's specks were my intended 'point of focus',

Robbie

In others, I came out a bit to get the whole face in,

The Gent

I just feel you have chopped either too much off or too little off.

No.1 should be chopped off just above the eyebrows, the white band is distracting.

No.2 should be chopped off above the specks as the background is distracting.

No.3 should be chopped of just as the very 'RED' colour comes in, the top part adds nothing.

No.4 is ok, but I think she would be better on the LHS of the frame.

No.5, you chopped the dude's hat off on the LHS, it's the brim of the hat, eyes and tash that make the image here, a tight crop on those would be the better image, i.e.

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Sorry, but you did ask for opinions, and that is mine.

John MD
Posted 30/03/2014 - 08:18 Link
Hey John thanks for your thoughts. I frame their tight in camera because I like it that way however i am tempted to try different styles in future. When shooting stranger's you don't have time sometimes to think
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Posted 30/03/2014 - 08:19 Link
I like your edit on the Last one
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bettyswolloks
Posted 30/03/2014 - 12:02 Link
I like all of your recent street shots Mate. The only critique I have is on the 1st shot, to my eye the skin is a little to smooth and blown.
The 3rd one is the winner for me though, the look of despair is spot on
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Posted 30/03/2014 - 12:07 Link
Cheers mate I love the third one myself
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ISO
Posted 30/03/2014 - 18:41 Link
QC, you must have the gift of the gab (assuming all these were 'asked for'). Do you take your Carrot with you .
I love the shots, but do think John MD has a point. Too tight a crop can change a 'Street Portrait' into a 'Portrait'. But hey, who cares, I like them.

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