YET MORE stranger street portraits
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David
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Just my 2-cents worth, but I'm not too sure you have the 'cropping' just right, a lot of the faces seem very tight in the frame.
No.4 seems the best to me, as she seems to have a little space.
I don't have a problem with going in even tighter, but you would need something to highlight as a point of focus.
These images remind me a little of passport pictures.
For example, I got close for this one, and the wee lad's specks were my intended 'point of focus',
Robbie
In others, I came out a bit to get the whole face in,
The Gent
I just feel you have chopped either too much off or too little off.
No.1 should be chopped off just above the eyebrows, the white band is distracting.
No.2 should be chopped off above the specks as the background is distracting.
No.3 should be chopped of just as the very 'RED' colour comes in, the top part adds nothing.
No.4 is ok, but I think she would be better on the LHS of the frame.
No.5, you chopped the dude's hat off on the LHS, it's the brim of the hat, eyes and tash that make the image here, a tight crop on those would be the better image, i.e.

Sorry, but you did ask for opinions, and that is mine.
John MD
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The 3rd one is the winner for me though, the look of despair is spot on
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I love the shots, but do think John MD has a point. Too tight a crop can change a 'Street Portrait' into a 'Portrait'. But hey, who cares, I like them.
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Not hearing much from people about my portraits so guessing I am getting them right ok????
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