Winter in the park
Posted 11/11/2008 - 15:51
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Looks more like Autumn in the park to me - winter I expect snow, or hoar frost or at the very least bare trees
Posted 11/11/2008 - 16:24
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Nice set of pictures but:
Martin.
Gwyn wrote:
Looks more like Autumn in the park to me - winter I expect snow, or hoar frost or at the very least bare trees
I second that. And you should remove some hidden text at the top of the first two. And the caption on nr. 3 should be corrected. Looks more like Autumn in the park to me - winter I expect snow, or hoar frost or at the very least bare trees
Martin.
Posted 11/11/2008 - 16:36
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I like 3 best, the others look under exposed.
I think you should loose the frame and text completely, actually, as a this is my business, I don't think, I know, it looks awful! sorry.
Some tips. keep it subtle, be very careful with vignettes or gradients - they usually look, at best, indecisive. try to sample a colour from the image for the text.
I think you should loose the frame and text completely, actually, as a this is my business, I don't think, I know, it looks awful! sorry.
Some tips. keep it subtle, be very careful with vignettes or gradients - they usually look, at best, indecisive. try to sample a colour from the image for the text.
Posted 11/11/2008 - 17:01
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Nice Autumn photos, my fav is #2.
I agree the text does spoil these excellent images.
I agree the text does spoil these excellent images.
Posted 11/11/2008 - 18:10
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Mike-P wrote:
I was expecting snow as well
Why have they got : "Your Text Here" at the top in very small black writing?
Double click the text tool in PS by mistake and voila! A mistake easy made and even easier overseen. I was expecting snow as well
Why have they got : "Your Text Here" at the top in very small black writing?
Happened to me, on several occasions In the past.
Martin.
Posted 11/11/2008 - 19:18
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Good series.
The third one is very good.
Regards f248
The third one is very good.
Regards f248
Pentax K7-Pentax 100-300F, Pentax 35-80F, Pentax 18-50DA, sigma 28-80 2.8 -sigma 135-400 APO.
Posted 11/11/2008 - 19:20
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Thanks for the input guys picked up a few things and will run with them I missed the text at the top of the pix and the over spell. Its helpful when people with more expierience are preperd to chip in and offer there opinion good or bad.
Ian
Ian
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