which works best?


dinneenp

Link Posted 03/03/2013 - 22:43
1.



2.



3.


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JohnX

Link Posted 03/03/2013 - 22:47
Top one.

The image works because here in the West we read left to right.
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Gamka

Link Posted 03/03/2013 - 23:02
1 !!!! or you could go from bottom right to top left.

No 2 suggests crashing and No 3 a rocket going into space.

Hullman

Link Posted 04/03/2013 - 06:37
Def no.1. I wonder if you have more sky available before cropping as it would help the composition if the plane was not so tight into the corner and it had some sky to fly into.

Nice shot
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AndrewA

Link Posted 04/03/2013 - 08:06
Hullman wrote:
Def no.1. I wonder if you have more sky available before cropping as it would help the composition if the plane was not so tight into the corner and it had some sky to fly into.

Nice shot

Yeah I agree, no 1 and a bit more sky.
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tyronet2000

Link Posted 04/03/2013 - 09:23
Or crop the 'plane off and say it's an abstract
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dinneenp

Link Posted 04/03/2013 - 09:48
Hullman wrote:
Def no.1. I wonder if you have more sky available before cropping as it would help the composition if the plane was not so tight into the corner and it had some sky to fly into.

Nice shot

I do have a photo with more sky, I'll try it this evening. cheers.
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womble

Link Posted 04/03/2013 - 19:15
No 1. K.
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davidstorm

Link Posted 04/03/2013 - 19:38
No1 also.

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Stuey

Link Posted 04/03/2013 - 20:19
Number 2 if you flip it 180 degrees - my son is wondering why I was holding the laptop upside down
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Gamka

Link Posted 04/03/2013 - 20:40
Stuey wrote:
Number 2 if you flip it 180 degrees - my son is wondering why I was holding the laptop upside down

On which axis? Horizontal I presume.

giofi

Link Posted 04/03/2013 - 20:51
AndrewA wrote:
Hullman wrote:
Def no.1. I wonder if you have more sky available before cropping as it would help the composition if the plane was not so tight into the corner and it had some sky to fly into.

Nice shot

Yeah I agree, no 1 and a bit more sky.

Another vote for number 1 and more sky on the top right.
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dinneenp

Link Posted 07/03/2013 - 20:00
Here's 1 with more sky, works better I think



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Last Edited by dinneenp on 07/03/2013 - 20:49
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