when we finish.....the liturgy???
Posted 13/10/2011 - 08:55
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That's a very effective image, and I do like the way the b&w gives it impact and a 'reportage' style.
You asked for C&C, so I'll say that I'm not sure about the amount of space above the head. You could try cropping that area to about half-way between the top of the head and the top of the frame, this would reduce the slight distraction of the white area on the right.
You asked for C&C, so I'll say that I'm not sure about the amount of space above the head. You could try cropping that area to about half-way between the top of the head and the top of the frame, this would reduce the slight distraction of the white area on the right.
Posted 13/10/2011 - 09:02
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Very nice, I agree with the cropping suggestions. Depth of field is just right for this, taking the shot from above is not usually recommended in portraiture, works OK here though, I would maybe burn the light part on the right hand side of the shot.
Posted 13/10/2011 - 12:48
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karma mechanic wrote:
That's a very effective image, and I do like the way the b&w gives it impact and a 'reportage' style.
You asked for C&C, so I'll say that I'm not sure about the amount of space above the head. You could try cropping that area to about half-way between the top of the head and the top of the frame, this would reduce the slight distraction of the white area on the right.
tnx for your comment...That's a very effective image, and I do like the way the b&w gives it impact and a 'reportage' style.
You asked for C&C, so I'll say that I'm not sure about the amount of space above the head. You could try cropping that area to about half-way between the top of the head and the top of the frame, this would reduce the slight distraction of the white area on the right.
you got it...i love the reportage style,
i dind't crop this pic..because the space above..give some tridimesionality...to the kid.. and show a little bit where we were..
but now..i try to crop as you said!
Posted 13/10/2011 - 12:53
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snappychappy wrote:
Very nice, I agree with the cropping suggestions. Depth of field is just right for this, taking the shot from above is not usually recommended in portraiture, works OK here though, I would maybe burn the light part on the right hand side of the shot.
tnx!!! Very nice, I agree with the cropping suggestions. Depth of field is just right for this, taking the shot from above is not usually recommended in portraiture, works OK here though, I would maybe burn the light part on the right hand side of the shot.
i'll try to burn the face
i kept dark the hand because it's cut off..do you think..it's better show it?
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italy
i converted in b&w..because i shot at 3200 with k7...
anyway i like this pic!
Any C&C welcome