A morning walk

trickletreat
Posted 13/10/2011 - 15:06 Link
There was some nice low light yesterday morning so took a stroll down to the river, taking a few on the way. Used the 28 2.8 AL and 55 1.4.


1.
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP4789.jpg[/IMG]




2.
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP4736.jpg[/IMG]




3.
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP4806.jpg[/IMG]




4.
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP4808.jpg[/IMG]




5.
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP4755.jpg[/IMG]




6.
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP4773.jpg[/IMG]




7.
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP4841.jpg[/IMG]


Your thoughts gratefully received. Also can someone tell be what pp I need to use to put two black borders on these?
Cheers Nigel
dinneenp
Posted 13/10/2011 - 15:37 Link
I like no 5 a lot. lovely bokeh and colour on the leaves.


no 2 for me is missing a focal point
no 3 had potential but is a bit soft in colour. here's something 'different' I tried wtih the same weed.
Cheers,
Pa
http://www.photoblog.ie where every post have a musical reference as it's title.
trickletreat
Posted 13/10/2011 - 16:37 Link
Cheers chap, and thanks for cc.
I did reduce the saturation on no3, and couldn't decide if it was an improvement or not. Here it is without messing with saturarion.




[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP4806_2.jpg[/IMG]

Nigel
puma
Posted 13/10/2011 - 21:12 Link
I like no 4
PPG link
coker
Posted 13/10/2011 - 23:06 Link
No.4 for me as well.

Would it be possible to (selectively) increase contrast/sharpness on the group of seed-heads, just left of the path?
With the line of the fence receding into the distance & the lines of the oof grasses & the shadow left foreground bringing the eye back, it would create a nice resting/finishing point for the composition.
(IMO!)

Roger.
The more I look, the more there is to see!
trickletreat
Posted 13/10/2011 - 23:11 Link
coker wrote:
No.4 for me as well.

Would it be possible to (selectively) increase contrast/sharpness on the group of seed-heads, just left of the path?
With the line of the fence receding into the distance & the lines of the oof grasses & the shadow left foreground bringing the eye back, it would create a nice resting/finishing point for the composition.
(IMO!)

Roger.
Cheers chaps,
I don't think my pp is upto that in iphoto , but agree with your line of thought.
Nigel
Edited by trickletreat: 13/10/2011 - 23:12

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