Urban Dereliction
no 3 is kinda spooky - but there you have a reaction,
no 4 I find has too many distracting colours and shape ... I think it wd look better in mono and trim the right black line,
don't like no 1
hope this is of help
Lilly
thank you for your honesty
points duely noted
No3 is a little spooky and given some background info it helps the composition.
No1 I like but it doesn't have the power of the others.
No3 would be better with the top third cropped out as it competes for attention because it is brighter and so dilutes the forground.
Nice shots overall.
Harry
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Nice shots though
no2 I like
no3 has atmosphere
No4 take the marble block home & stand a pot on it, Close in on the keys & experiment with lighting & viewpoint, flash & reflector(s) use B&W, thers a creepy drama pic there somewhere,(imo)
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16 years
Lincoln
Here are a few of my photos
all comments welcome
Closed Thread Mill - framed in a frame
The broken window
Abandoned hospital theatre
Abandoned prison, keys!
All taken with my trusty Pentax K100D and 18-55mm lens