Under the arches

robbie_d
Posted 28/03/2010 - 20:43 Link
Having previously avoided PP, I've started to have a bit of a go, only Picasa so nothing major, but thought I would see what I could do with some older pictures.

This one was taken underneath one of the arches of the bridge at Ironbridge in Shropshire. It's a completely opportunistic shot (literally just got it in time), which probably explains why it isn't great technically (a bit soft, etc.).

I tried to salvage it at best I could with a crop to focus the attention on the subject matter a little more, a filtered B&W conversion and a little sharpening.

I'm fairly happy with the result, it has quite a nice grainy feel to it, though it's far from perfect. As always, I hope the composition goes someway to offsetting the technical deficiencies!

All criticism welcome!

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bwlchmawr
Posted 28/03/2010 - 20:54 Link
An unusual and effective approach, making the "frame" such a huge element. Good shadow detail retained.

Andrew
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royd63uk
Posted 28/03/2010 - 22:02 Link
I love this image perfectly balanced and framed the woman model? just makes it.
Hope you dont mind but had a go at it myself.

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Roy
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robbie_d
Posted 28/03/2010 - 22:10 Link
royd63uk wrote:
I love this image perfectly balanced and framed the woman model? just makes it.
Hope you dont mind but had a go at it myself.

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Don't mind at all! I like what you've done with it. What is it that you've done?
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royd63uk
Posted 28/03/2010 - 23:01 Link
increased contrast,dodge and burn and some more sharpening.
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