The Magnificent Seven

bforbes
Posted 24/04/2020 - 18:58 Link
Another dip in the tool box.

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...and B&W

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alfpics
Posted 24/04/2020 - 21:09 - Helpful Comment Link
Gripping stuff...
Seriously - a novel idea, I prefer the colour version. A suggestion if I may; a bit more saturation/ brightness to the rust with a darker background to make them really stand out? Just a thought,
Andy
LennyBloke
Posted 24/04/2020 - 21:54 - Helpful Comment Link
My preference with subjects like these is generally monochrome - but here the gorgeous rust colour enhances the tools beautifully, the shadows give them depth and the variety of types adds to the interest

Please don't think I'm being picky (again) but I think the choice of background may not be the best - to improve the contrast between subject and background a white or light grey material may be better :
LennyBloke
bforbes
Posted 24/04/2020 - 23:45 Link
A rework with Andy and Johns comments in mind

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alfpics
Posted 24/04/2020 - 23:55 Link
Certainly an improvement IMO
Andy
walkeja
Posted 25/04/2020 - 10:30 Link
Which one is Brad Dexter?
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bforbes
Posted 25/04/2020 - 16:38 Link
walkeja wrote:
Which one is Brad Dexter?
I think I saw Brad in the carpenters tools
Edited by bforbes: 25/04/2020 - 16:39
LennyBloke
Posted 25/04/2020 - 17:01 Link
alfpics wrote:
Certainly an improvement IMO
Couldn't agree more - they stand out far better
LennyBloke
MrB
Posted 25/04/2020 - 17:52 Link
The evolution of manual tools.

I like the reworked version.

Philip
bforbes
Posted 26/04/2020 - 11:34 Link
MrB wrote:
The evolution of manual tools.

I like the reworked version.

Philip
Yes I think the advice was good.
cardiffgareth
Posted 27/04/2020 - 13:16 Link
I like the blacks in the opening colour image but prefer the lighter rusts in the edited version. Not sure if you use Lightroom but if you do then head over to the HSL panel and select luminance and adjust the orange slider. That should brighten the oranges in the rust and leave the blacks as is.
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Sry
Posted 29/04/2020 - 22:37 Link
I like the first two (the reworked version is way too bright for my taste - no mystery left). It took me a moment to realize they were the same image, and I wondered how you had managed to find two sets of the exact same tools, one rusty and one not

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