Sunflower

spaceraider
Posted 07/08/2007 - 20:01 Link
Any thoughts how I could have improved this one? Maybe the leaf at the bottom right should have been behing the flower?

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Ammonyte
Posted 07/08/2007 - 21:25 Link
Yes, lose the leaf, and maybe adjust the positioning of the flower too, it doesn't seem to be quite on the thirds or in the center either. Maybe more light directly on the heart of the flower? Also try a tight crop on the flower and lose all the leaves. Nice combination of colours, very summery and suggestive of a bright sunny summer day.
Tim the Ammonyte
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lenscape
Posted 07/08/2007 - 21:57 Link
It looks cut-out. Where's the background gone?
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spaceraider
Posted 08/08/2007 - 07:26 Link
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It looks cut-out. Where's the background gone?
Not cut out, that really was the cloudless sky at the time.
lenscape
Posted 08/08/2007 - 10:42 Link
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Not cut out, that really was the cloudless sky at the time.
Remarkable.
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