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Posted 26/02/2011 - 19:22
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Hello Katie
I love the colours but find that my eyes are flicking round looking for a clear focal point.
Dave
I love the colours but find that my eyes are flicking round looking for a clear focal point.
Dave
Posted 26/02/2011 - 19:48
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Glorious colours and I love the soft focus effect. Being really fussy, I'd move the daffodil a little to the left to biudge the gap between the crocuses.
You should be very pleased with this.
You should be very pleased with this.
Best wishes,
Andrew
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Andrew
"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
My website: http://www.ephotozine.com/user/bwlchmawr-199050
http://s927.photobucket.com/home/ADC3440/index
https://www.flickr.com/photos/78898196@N05
Posted 26/02/2011 - 19:52
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Duplicated thread removed.
Nice colours and style. Not quite sure about the splash of yellow and the glass.
Nice colours and style. Not quite sure about the splash of yellow and the glass.
Best regards, John
Posted 26/02/2011 - 19:59
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Dave, front crocus is SUPPOSED to be the main focal point~!
Andrew, the daff just wouldnt stay where i wanted it to, should have moved the glass around.
John, sorry about the duplictate, couldnt get photo on first post. I like the yellow, but the glass isnt good. Must do better.
Thanks for all your comments
Andrew, the daff just wouldnt stay where i wanted it to, should have moved the glass around.
John, sorry about the duplictate, couldnt get photo on first post. I like the yellow, but the glass isnt good. Must do better.
Thanks for all your comments
S**t happens, but usually before I can get my camera out
Posted 26/02/2011 - 20:52
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I quite like it, Katie and I think it wouldn't be as good without that bright yellow daffodil. The only thing I don't like is the glass and the way you've cut the bottom off. It needs something more stylish/elegant. Maybe a portrait orientation and a real nice vase (displayed in full) would help? Otherwise great colours and DOF.
Dodging and burning are steps to take care of mistakes God made in establishing tonal relationships. - Ansel Adams -
Posted 26/02/2011 - 22:05
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Thanks lidy, i agree about the glass. the only problem is the flowers have really short stems, only about 4 inches, so finding a vessel to hold them was the problem.
Maybe try using a clamp of some kind instead.
Maybe try using a clamp of some kind instead.
S**t happens, but usually before I can get my camera out
Posted 26/02/2011 - 23:35
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Love the photo and wouldn't change a thing personally (except for a more interesting background?). Thanks for sharing.
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