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katiem111
Posted 26/02/2011 - 18:59 Link
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S**t happens, but usually before I can get my camera out
davem
Posted 26/02/2011 - 19:22 Link
Hello Katie

I love the colours but find that my eyes are flicking round looking for a clear focal point.

Dave
bwlchmawr
Posted 26/02/2011 - 19:48 Link
Glorious colours and I love the soft focus effect. Being really fussy, I'd move the daffodil a little to the left to biudge the gap between the crocuses.

You should be very pleased with this.
Best wishes,

Andrew

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johnriley
Posted 26/02/2011 - 19:52 Link
Duplicated thread removed.

Nice colours and style. Not quite sure about the splash of yellow and the glass.
Best regards, John
katiem111
Posted 26/02/2011 - 19:59 Link
Dave, front crocus is SUPPOSED to be the main focal point~!
Andrew, the daff just wouldnt stay where i wanted it to, should have moved the glass around.
John, sorry about the duplictate, couldnt get photo on first post. I like the yellow, but the glass isnt good. Must do better.
Thanks for all your comments
S**t happens, but usually before I can get my camera out
lidy
Posted 26/02/2011 - 20:52 Link
I quite like it, Katie and I think it wouldn't be as good without that bright yellow daffodil. The only thing I don't like is the glass and the way you've cut the bottom off. It needs something more stylish/elegant. Maybe a portrait orientation and a real nice vase (displayed in full) would help? Otherwise great colours and DOF.
Dodging and burning are steps to take care of mistakes God made in establishing tonal relationships. - Ansel Adams -
katiem111
Posted 26/02/2011 - 22:05 Link
Thanks lidy, i agree about the glass. the only problem is the flowers have really short stems, only about 4 inches, so finding a vessel to hold them was the problem.
Maybe try using a clamp of some kind instead.
S**t happens, but usually before I can get my camera out
Opethian
Posted 26/02/2011 - 23:35 Link
Love the photo and wouldn't change a thing personally (except for a more interesting background?). Thanks for sharing.

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