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Posted 09/03/2010 - 16:18
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Both very interesting: I love this kind of photography but almost prefer looking at someone else's work. The second one, in particular is good. I think it's the juxtaposition of window display and people.
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Andrew
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Andrew
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Andrew
"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
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Posted 09/03/2010 - 17:26
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bwichmawr wrote:
Both very interesting: I love this kind of photography but almost prefer looking at someone else's work. The second one, in particular is good. I think it's the juxtaposition of window display and people.
Regards,
Andrew
Thanks Andrew.
Both very interesting: I love this kind of photography but almost prefer looking at someone else's work. The second one, in particular is good. I think it's the juxtaposition of window display and people.
Regards,
Andrew
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Posted 09/03/2010 - 17:28
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Dr. Mhuni wrote:
The first one's okay - nowhere obvious to rest the eye IMO and ideally the two women bottom right would have been in focus. I like the second - a great combination of elements, just a pity about the guy in the shade.
Thanks for the comments Mhuni. My intention in the first was to portray the line of people as the main feature of the shot.The first one's okay - nowhere obvious to rest the eye IMO and ideally the two women bottom right would have been in focus. I like the second - a great combination of elements, just a pity about the guy in the shade.
I agree with you on the second - croppong him out would lose me some of the picture on the wall
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Posted 10/03/2010 - 00:34
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I'm with Mhnui here, the first one is alright, I like the row of standing people and row of sitting people, but it needs to be sharper. The second one is much better - a great scene and it's great the way you've captured the lad and the girl meeting gazes.
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Posted 10/03/2010 - 07:20
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I'm with Tim and Mhuni - the first one is not sharp enough and seems a little aimless. I like the idea of the second one and possibly both men are superfluous but then the poster girl is rather detached from the seated girls which I take to be the main purpose here.
Mike
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Posted 12/03/2010 - 20:16
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Tks guys!
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