simply grass
Posted 14/06/2010 - 20:46
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I really really like this shot for it's simplistic quality
but I find the DOF in the right hand corner of the shot irritating
maybe a better crop or retake with a bigger DOF
james
but I find the DOF in the right hand corner of the shot irritating
maybe a better crop or retake with a bigger DOF
james
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Posted 14/06/2010 - 21:13
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Yes, James has it. So nearly perfect but this needs 100% sharpness, the way you've set it up. Nice idea.
We used to have fights with these "darts" when I was a boy...
We used to have fights with these "darts" when I was a boy...
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Andrew
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Andrew
"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
My website: http://www.ephotozine.com/user/bwlchmawr-199050
http://s927.photobucket.com/home/ADC3440/index
https://www.flickr.com/photos/78898196@N05
Posted 14/06/2010 - 21:43
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Dare I suggest a horizontal flip so the stalk is at the LHS.
John
John
Posted 15/06/2010 - 06:48
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DOIK wrote:
Dare I suggest a horizontal flip so the stalk is at the LHS.
John
Good idea that man.Dare I suggest a horizontal flip so the stalk is at the LHS.
John
Posted 15/06/2010 - 06:50
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Here's a second shot, I think it needs a bit more space at the bottom.
Posted 15/06/2010 - 08:45
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My pick would be the portrait orientation image in your later post (I cannot see the original at present).
Posted 15/06/2010 - 08:57
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mikew wrote:
What background did you use?
Nice colour but it does seem to lack the killer sharpness that you hope for as a viewer in shots like these. Nice composition too.
Mike
I am an idiot - didn't read first post carefully enough.What background did you use?
Nice colour but it does seem to lack the killer sharpness that you hope for as a viewer in shots like these. Nice composition too.
Mike
Sorry.
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Posted 15/06/2010 - 10:22
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mikew wrote:
I am an idiot - didn't read first post carefully enough.
Sorry.
No Mike - human. Like us all.
I am an idiot - didn't read first post carefully enough.
Sorry.
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