reflections C+C please

neilr
Posted 09/06/2010 - 14:07 Link
Hi All
not sure these work I was trying for different.

1)[IMG]http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b195/radicalwood/transport/reflections3.jpg[/IMG]

2) [IMG]http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b195/radicalwood/transport/reflections2.jpg[/IMG]

cheers Neil
Anvh
Posted 09/06/2010 - 14:15 Link
Neil what are you trying to do here, capture the cars or the reflections?
I think with the first image you took too much of a compromise to get a nice reflection that the car isn't nice in the photo, the angle feels odd.
The second one is better and it works well but I get the feeling also their it's a compromise but that hasn't to be a bad thing.
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snappychappy
Posted 09/06/2010 - 15:00 Link
I agree also, like the second shot best.
terje-l
Posted 09/06/2010 - 16:29 Link
The second shows a good reflection as well as good detail of a classic car. Would like to see a little more of the car, though.

I'm afraid the first one doesn't do anything for me.
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johnriley
Posted 09/06/2010 - 16:34 Link
The idea is there, which is great. I think if you take the idea and repeat it with a slightly tighter composition you will get something very interesting.

The reflected figure or item needs to be striking and simple, the one in shot 1 is too indistinct and the one in shot 2 is too busy.

The area used as the reflector needs to be shown in such a way that there isn't a lot of unwantewd detail surrounding it.

Having got the idea, it just needs working on a bit more.
Best regards, John
neilr
Posted 09/06/2010 - 16:57 Link
cheers guys
I do have wider shots of the both cars so may play a bit. it has given me some direction and something to aim for. I think I may find it hard to get unclutterd shots but will keep trying. Still have along way to go and a lot of leaning to do.

cheers Neil
bwlchmawr
Posted 09/06/2010 - 19:55 Link
I like the way you've tried to make a virtue out of a necessity, Neil. I always find reflections such a problem when photographing classic cars.

Nice work!
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Hyram
Posted 09/06/2010 - 20:02 Link
I think for reflection type shots, one of the key issues is to have something worth reflecting.

So in image No. 1, leaving aside any debate about composition, the ideal would be a really nice classic car reflected in the bonnet, rather than some camper vans.

Keeping oneself out of the shot is an ever present problem also
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dougf8
Posted 09/06/2010 - 20:05 Link
RTTS 10?

I like 2 better as the darker colour gives a better reflection. The chrome grill and lamp are nice at the top and your eye is drawn down to the woman and child and the perfect fluffy clouds. The distortion gives a fisheye view of the whole event. It shows what's happening people looking at fine bodywork.

I don't like the top left sky round the tree but I guess you had to clear it out to make the car more striking.

Good image, tells a story in a interesting way.
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Edited by dougf8: 09/06/2010 - 20:19
i-Berg
Posted 10/06/2010 - 07:58 Link
I'm also a sucker for duco and chrome Neil - see link...

Old cars have plenty going for them, even if you don't have the pictures to do the reflections themselves!
neilr
Posted 10/06/2010 - 12:44 Link
i-Berg

nice pics, I do love the hotrods, we dont get that many over her nowadays
robbie_d
Posted 10/06/2010 - 14:12 Link
johnriley wrote:
The idea is there, which is great. I think if you take the idea and repeat it with a slightly tighter composition you will get something very interesting.

The reflected figure or item needs to be striking and simple, the one in shot 1 is too indistinct and the one in shot 2 is too busy.

The area used as the reflector needs to be shown in such a way that there isn't a lot of unwantewd detail surrounding it.

Having got the idea, it just needs working on a bit more.
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thoughton
Posted 10/06/2010 - 14:17 Link
I like the second shot rather a lot. I think the reflection is perfectly fine, it's clear what is being reflected. The only downside is the top left section, some strange outlines around those trees and the tilted ground looks a bit odd.
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Posted 10/06/2010 - 15:08 Link
i love the second shot because its a great reflection! the white shirts matches the clouds. and the people on the back add a nice mix. i agree with tim about the background

anyway theres dust in the car?
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neilr
Posted 11/06/2010 - 13:33 Link
thanks for the comments, its my PP skills with the background the sky was really pale (burt out) so tryed putting something in. the tilt on the background is me keeping the rad upright on the car getting the time to learn the PP is difficult.

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