Red flowers 24mm Miranda
Posted 20/06/2010 - 11:15
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There's a couple of shots to demonstrate selective focusing! Nice colours in the first two, but, as you say, going too far in the third. It makes the background compete for attention, which is rarely a good thing.
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Posted 20/06/2010 - 12:58
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I actually prefer the last one as the in focus part seems to have more pop. I'd agree with John about the background though, I'm not sure if your editing package facilitates it, but you could try (very) slightly desaturating & darkening the yellow channel which would then let the subject stand on its own merit.
I normally appreciate a lovely creamy background, but I think the background in #2 is delightful, full of colour, enough detail to suggest foliage but without being busy. This will have been due to the longer focus distance giving slightly more depth of field. I would have been interested to see the 1st shot at f4 or f5.6 to see if it resulted in an equally delightful backround.
I normally appreciate a lovely creamy background, but I think the background in #2 is delightful, full of colour, enough detail to suggest foliage but without being busy. This will have been due to the longer focus distance giving slightly more depth of field. I would have been interested to see the 1st shot at f4 or f5.6 to see if it resulted in an equally delightful backround.
Posted 20/06/2010 - 16:38
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Seems my wife prefers the last edited shot too.
The second one seems sharper to my eyes, but possibly due to the stamen standing out.
I think the yellow a nice contrast to the red, but possibly lightening the green background is causing a distraction to the flower? Might have a tinker with it tonight, using corel x2.
The second one seems sharper to my eyes, but possibly due to the stamen standing out.
I think the yellow a nice contrast to the red, but possibly lightening the green background is causing a distraction to the flower? Might have a tinker with it tonight, using corel x2.
Posted 20/06/2010 - 17:59
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I like the first one most but would prefer the main point of focus to be brighter! Love the lens: I've been looking for one at a reasonable price for six months!
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Andrew
"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
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Posted 21/06/2010 - 23:03
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Tried editing the last photo above, that had already gone through the quick edit in X2 but it seemed to have lost definition between the colours. Must learn how to apply mask and then boost saturation to the areas I need.
Anyway, below I just used the level curves to adjust the highlights without applying to everything, and a function called Clarify which seems to have boosted the sharpness a bit.

Got some more that Sunday on the 24mm at f2.8 out with the dog


He's very skilled at throwing the ball at you too!

Managed to catch a smaller creature with the 18-55 which isn't too bad at getting close at the long end

Anyway, below I just used the level curves to adjust the highlights without applying to everything, and a function called Clarify which seems to have boosted the sharpness a bit.

Got some more that Sunday on the 24mm at f2.8 out with the dog


He's very skilled at throwing the ball at you too!

Managed to catch a smaller creature with the 18-55 which isn't too bad at getting close at the long end

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I feel a macro purchase coming in over the next couple of months...
Here are two shots taken in a friends garden yesterday, all at f2.8 on K-m set to spot metering.
Not sure which one I prefer, and actually if they are that sharp. In my eyes the mid focus one looks sharper?
Not sure on any editing required. Clicking on one step edit in X2 gets the below, which is brighter, more shadow, sharpened quite a bit and boost highlights. I often think it goes too far.
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