Pon veiw
Posted 21/08/2010 - 21:23
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Pentaxophile wrote:
Unfortunately a bit murky, especially top right. The monument's also a bit central - but it's a fabulous view.
DittoUnfortunately a bit murky, especially top right. The monument's also a bit central - but it's a fabulous view.
I also feel I want to see more of that clump of grass in the bottom right corner, at present its more of a distraction than part of the scene.
Posted 22/08/2010 - 00:11
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Nice scene and vibrant colours. It seems slightly green but perhaps that is just the pond weed tricking my eyes. I also agree with the comments above about the top right murkiness, and the clump of grass not being prominent enough. How about cropping the bottom and right side like this?
Tim
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Posted 22/08/2010 - 07:15
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Nice and sharp and I like the original crop the best.
Not too keen on all the green stuff on the water though.
Not too keen on all the green stuff on the water though.
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Posted 22/08/2010 - 09:26
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Thanks for the feed back guys its always helpful to get other peoples thoughts on a subject. This was taken using a filter I purchased recently and used for the first time here I think the photo would have been better taken with the 10/20 opening up more of the scene to be honest.
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