Phoenicopterus Roseus
Posted 15/03/2011 - 00:11
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very elegant, shame you did not get the whole reflection in the water.
The only thing I don't like is that it is to central in the frame.
The only thing I don't like is that it is to central in the frame.
C&C welcome.
Don.
Don.
Posted 15/03/2011 - 08:18
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thanks! i know, it's a shame, but it was my first, you know, emotions...
Posted 15/03/2011 - 13:01
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I find the feathers a little distracting, especially the one by the bird's beak. Any chance of cloning them out? The image also looks a bit "muddy", but then I am viewing it on an uncalibrated work monitor, so I'll have another look when I get home.
I also agree about the whole reflection not being in the shot.
Fiona
I also agree about the whole reflection not being in the shot.
Fiona
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Posted 15/03/2011 - 13:18
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no, it is muddy, cos it was cloudy and water wasn't that blue!
for clonig, i noticed it just now. thank for your comments
for clonig, i noticed it just now. thank for your comments
Posted 15/03/2011 - 16:45
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The bird is very nice, nice colour and detail. The water is less nice, the colour is a bit yuck .
+1 on cloning out the feather by the beak too.
+1 on cloning out the feather by the beak too.
Tim
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Posted 15/03/2011 - 16:47
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eheheh tanks though!
Posted 18/03/2011 - 13:03
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No, I didn't mean that the water looks muddy - that's a given without me saying it! I meant that the whole image looked a bit dull - probably not helped by the water, but I think the flamingo lacks a bit of punch.
It doesn't really stand out to me, that's what I was trying to say!
Fiona
It doesn't really stand out to me, that's what I was trying to say!
Fiona
"Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep". ~Scott Adams
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Posted 18/03/2011 - 20:45
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eheheh ok, that's fine
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