One from Yellowstone National Park

walkeja
Posted 26/10/2012 - 11:22 Link
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Photo of Yellowstone Lake, Wyoming.

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snappychappy
Posted 26/10/2012 - 16:09 Link
Cut a bit of the bottom if I were you.
JohnX
Posted 26/10/2012 - 16:15 Link
Sorry, does nothing at all for me Walkje, but presumably bringing back good memories?
Stuey
Posted 26/10/2012 - 19:28 Link
It looks like an honest photo to me - you could photoshop it to death and give it more impact but whilst it maybe is no stunner I like it for it's honesty but agree with snappy that if you crop the bootm it may improve matters
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Gwyn
Posted 26/10/2012 - 21:12 Link
It's a nice enough photo, but it just doesn't say Yellowstone to me. It could be anywhere.

I agree about the cropping, but don't expect you do. I think some foreground interest (the front shore for instance, or a few trees) would have helped.
walkeja
Posted 27/10/2012 - 10:46 Link
snappychappy wrote:
Cut a bit of the bottom if I were you.
That is what I was thinking of doing, but I thought I would see what others thought first.

Gwyn wrote:
It's a nice enough photo, but it just doesn't say Yellowstone to me. It could be anywhere.
That is why it was taken, people only think of Yellowstone for geysers, etc..
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Gwyn
Posted 27/10/2012 - 10:52 Link
I understand that John. Yellowstone Lake is overlooked, I agree.
I wish you'd put some foreground into this photo though, just to balance it up some.
walkeja
Posted 27/10/2012 - 11:58 Link
Gwyn wrote:
I understand that John. Yellowstone Lake is overlooked, I agree.
I wish you'd put some foreground into this photo though, just to balance it up some.
Unforunately, there wasn't any foreground where we stopped except for the coach.
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DrOrloff
Posted 27/10/2012 - 12:03 Link
Given the location there is an obvious expectation of more spectacular scenery. However, disregarding the location then I think the scene still needs much more to grab the attention. There is no particular foreground interest, the distant mountains are too distant to have much of an impact and the semi-silhouetted vegetation on the promontory is a bit nothingy. These elements just combine to give a rather flat scene. It's in no way a bad image but it just isn't memorable. For that I think a different viewpoint is needed to lead the eye on a journey through the landscape and ideally combined with soemthing special about the light.
Edited by DrOrloff: 27/10/2012 - 12:04

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