On the beach

stigg
Posted 01/06/2013 - 17:57 Link
A few from the beach, not great but I think there getting better!!!

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All the best
Brian

And come him slow or come him fast it is but death who comes at last.
MrB
Posted 02/06/2013 - 09:48 Link
Brian, I like the composition of the second shot, but the dull flat light is not being helpful to your image. Perhaps it might add interest if you remove most of the grey sky and some of the left hand side, and increase the contrast and saturation of the remainder, e.g.-

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Philip
stigg
Posted 02/06/2013 - 13:57 Link
That does look better Philip, thanks for the tip.
All the best
Brian

And come him slow or come him fast it is but death who comes at last.
Gamka
Posted 02/06/2013 - 16:41 Link
MrB wrote:
Brian, I like the composition of the second shot, but the dull flat light is not being helpful to your image. Perhaps it might add interest if you remove most of the grey sky and some of the left hand side, and increase the contrast and saturation of the remainder, e.g.-

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Philip
Slightly better would have been to be standing or holding the camera a little higher up and get some more sea above the last/right hand post and then to crop down to the horizon which would remove the distracting line. A little cloning to show what I mean:
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