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Posted 11/02/2009 - 23:34
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Maybe could have cropped closer to the swan. there is not a lot happening to the right and left
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Posted 11/02/2009 - 23:42
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Thanks - you're not wrong.
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Posted 11/02/2009 - 23:44
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Nice reflection - I'd be tempted to crop it in a portrait format and just concentrate on that and the subject.
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Posted 12/02/2009 - 01:36
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Cropped to portrait, or even maybe a square print, and you have a lovely photo there. The reflection makes for a lovely shot.
Best wishes, Kris.
Best wishes, Kris.
Kris Lockyear
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It is an illusion that photos are made with the camera… they are made with the eye, heart and head. Henri Cartier-Bresson
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Posted 12/02/2009 - 09:39
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Yes you have got the exposure spot on. Not easy with this kind of subject.
Peter
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Posted 12/02/2009 - 10:36
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A very nice shot, and beautifully composed. As so often the case, I am at odds with other opinion re cropping. I think the movement of water and reflections each side of this picture add further interest, and help counteract the very dark areas. These serve as a natural frame to the main subject, and help the eye wander around the picture.
Kind regards, Adrian.
Kind regards, Adrian.
Posted 12/02/2009 - 18:17
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I think the second one is cropped too close and prefer the original. To me the reflections on the right hand side (of the original image) are a little distracting, but I really like the waves caused by the swan swimming - I think it gives it a nice sense of movement.
Posted 14/02/2009 - 05:00
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Agree with Woodworm. Sometimes cropping not needed.
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